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All Comments on 'Our Wedding Night'

by debbie9710

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estragonestragonalmost 13 years ago
Story was hot

but writing was poor. I gave up quibbling, as it was becoming rewriting. You might wish to have a copy editor as well as a story editor.

handsomentenderhandsomentenderalmost 13 years ago
Wonderfully romantic.

Very well done. I enjoyed the romance and passion interwoven into the storyline and your writing was fine. Keep up the good storytelling!

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