by KY ridgerunner
THIS STORY SERIES JUST KEEPS IMPROVING PART BY PART
CHAPTER 10 WAS GREAT AND I HOPE THIS STORY CARRIES ON AND ON.
THE CHARACTERS IN THE STORY HAVE BEEN MADE SO REALISTIC, YOU FEEL THAT YOU ALMOST KNOW THEM YOURSELF.
CAN'T WAIT FOR NUMBER 11???????
You are a good writer, but you don't know how to end a story. This story has gotten really old. Get a new idea and move on.
Pet is the most amazing character I've read about in a long time. The way she is evolving is great! While I'm looking forward to her learning to be on her own and leaving Dave and Kathy, I also dread it as it will be the ending of a wonderful storyline. Don't listen to others who want you to stop this story. If they don't like it, they're perfectly welcome to read other authors. You're doing great, now just keep it up!!