All Comments on 'Plaything'

Very nice start - am looking forward to more!!!

I would have liked a bit more in this chapter, but it is a good start none-the-less.

Nice lead in, just enough to whet the appetite. Would love to be in his position.

The ways in which you form, or rather, string together this melody of words astounds me. The story flows in absolute perfect motion only to be briefly disrupted by a sudden thrill that moves my imagination from a brusque thrill to a tremor of energy! Each piece of this text is fully bound into my head as I read onwards.

Can't wait until the continuation!

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