All Comments on 'Power Plays Ch. 10'

Whose dickey won't get hard unless some stupid excuse for a woman calles him SIR

I like the story, I just wish there was a little more emotional development. Also more affectionate touching, especially after her and Joe go at it for a while. I really like where you're taking this!! I just hope that in the end you keep it a couple and not a guy with two women; there have been too many stories that turn out that way! I mean, not like they can't involve other people, but just when it comes down to it they're a couple. But you're an amazing writer, keep up the great work!!