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Echoing snarls of rage bounced off the stone walls of the dungeon as the Shadow watched the glowing vision in the mist rising from a luminous cauldron. "I'd do anything for you" reverberated across the space. Pathetic minions scattered under the force of their master's wrath as he took out his frustrations on anything within reach. Kicking aside a corpse he paced the dark space, his cloak sliding through the crimson pools that covered the floor.
"All I not lost," he whispered quietly to himself, he stopped in revelation; a quiet chuckle escaped his throat, "It can be undone." He waved his hand to summon the book he required, rather than fetching it like a useless mortal. Examining the volume's dusty and evil pages, his pale claw tapped as he paused at the one he needed. His maniacal laughter filled the dungeon, as his minions cringed in horror and fled from whatever he had planned.
Completely oblivious, the woman in the vision lay back into the bed and slept with a smile on her face.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 9 years agoReality check:
Dude, she's got broken ribs, at least pretend to be a gentleman for once and keep it in your pants. I take it either your're not a normal person or you've never tried fucking with broken ribs... He's such a selfish prat.
Her first and her only? Well that's taking things for granted isn't it?
How can he lick both quick AND slow?
Shouldn't Zac have been angry that his 2nd showed so little respect that he just walked right on into the room knowing that Zac is in there fucking the woman with broken ribs? Was he hoping to get in on that pre-beaten-up action? How fucking rude.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoPersonally I've had broken ribs, dislocated shoulders and broken limbs to name a few recent injuries, it didn't stop me from having sex or getting on with daily life.... perhaps Ally has a high pain threshold and no time for injuries. Enjoy the story and quit nit picking
Good job Shadowsung :)
Shadowsungover 10 years agoAuthorJust thought I would respond to the many comments relating to a few points.
Yes, I have never had broken ribs, but I want to point out that if you keep reading, as well as the hints so far, Ally is not exactly your average human, so the point is moot. The amount of people that are complaining about this fact are making me confused- this is a story about werewolves and magic and fantasy. How does having broken ribs and having sex despite it remove its plausibility?
The anatomy part I now realise is wrong- I never knew since I lost my hymen at the age of 6 and a half. Most of my first time, hymen-breaking sex comes from the stories found on sites like these (as you point out many of the authors get it wrong). Sorry about that guys!
Asides from these- I hope you are enjoying the story and I hope you continue to enjoy it as I put out more chapters.
Shadowsung
PallasAthena123over 10 years ago...What a lot of other readers have observed.
Have you ever sprained your ankle? Or had a head injury? Getting up to pee is a miserable, loathsome chore, never mind wandering around, sitting outside, and having sex.
If the sprain isn't that bad, she might be able to hobble on it a bit, but with it being so recent, she is still going to try to keep her weight off of it. But the head injury . . . jeez! You don't even have to have any brain or skull damage for those to hurt like hell. For days. There's also A LOT of swelling involved. And that amount of pain makes you cranky, nauseous, and exhausted.
I don't have any personal experience with broken ribs, but I know enough to know her actions are unrealistic.
One commenter pointed out that she could have advanced healing. I figure you'd tell us a little more straight-out if that were the case.
Another anatomy-thing you got wrong. And a lot of authors do this. The hymen isn't deep inside the vagina, it's part of the vulva at the entrance to he vagina. As in, if anything is "inside" then it has passed the hymen.
Overall it is a promising, if cliched, story, and I look forward to reading the rest.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoIt was really good, but it was too fast. Even without injuries she wouldn't have sex without asking what the hell just happened. And a question for all stories, do female characters on this site have periods?
