All Comments on 'Refined Adjustments Ch. 03'

by neelu18

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Ok...Me likey.

This was good. Looking for Ch. 4

ariesgirlariesgirlalmost 11 years ago

This girl is making me dizzy going back and forth with her decisions with Johnny. I know she is scared and inexperienced but she going to need to open up and let Johnny know of her fears.

I can already see there is going to be some beef between Rome and Johnny.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
keep it going

Please next chapter Please I can see there's gonna be a struggle between Johnny and jerome

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Can't wait to read more chapters X)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Wow

Please continue I love this

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
wow i dont know

Seems kinda like a rapist, from professor to street talking possesivness. Kinda uncomfortable.

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