All Comments on 'Restless Dreams'

by FireKrystals

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rot_teufelrot_teufelover 11 years ago

The stories not bad, but it could really use an edit, get someone else to read your stuff. There are some kinks that stop the reader in their tracks, it doesn't flow easily.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Loved

i have been looking forever for a story like this!

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