All Comments on 'Sales Team'

10 stars for this outstanding non hooker tale????

Well written, well constructed and well enjoyed.

Please write more.

...wasn't ready for the story to end. Well-played.

French people do not speak english like that!

What? The story? It's an awesome piece, why?

:p

oui

What more can be said. One of the very best.

rate a five star*****,; this is one of those stories.

most are 3 or less stars. maybe 15% are 4 stars.

the inflated ratings mean this one should be 10 stars **********

rates right up there with FOOL ME ONCE. without ballot stuffers.

no nude sluts at a cabin, or in a pool, nor was it a hooker fetish, or a limp wrist boston to bmgham..

mostly not a wwimmppyy radk

5 stars and bot one less.

if you find something great. don't let it get away. TK U MLJ LV NV

Excellent writing, well crafted and with a pace and characters far above the usual. Thank you for the treat of this beautifully prepared and plated offering (to keep in the food /cooking motif!).

I love this story. This is one of the best.

5 Stars

Never read this before although it has been flagged as a tagged story. It's a feel good tale

Fantabulous! Loved it! Excellent reading. Emotional story. Good sentence structure. Good punctuation. Good plot. Good Show! Cheers!

Well written and very sexy!

of the best, currently. 5 stars **********

This story is the best story I've read since I first found out about literotica. I mean just wonderful and to make things even better is that there wasn't even that much sex in here and even less detail. I would re-read this story multiple times and enjoy it every time. Please please please write more either as an add on to this story or as other pieces of literotica literature. 5 STARS

BEST YET

5************s

Very enjoyable read!

Thank you for a very well written and in my opinion realistic story!

Well written and great characters.

Best story I've read in a long long time. Perfect balance

of real life and life in bed. Thank you for your time to write.

(I think it's, "I was shaken.")

All I can say is, "WOW!". It was truly a remarkably written story. There's one problem though... this thing belongs in a real published book! I feel that it being on this site doesn't give it justice. I expect some cheezy erotic novel, with a minimal amount of character developement on here. This exceded that expectation, and is truly in a class of it's own. Hell, they could make this into a movie, using the former boyfriend (or was it husband?) as a main antagonist. He was the only thing that caught me slightly off guard. I'm not so sure you'd get fired from your significant other being an a$$hole. That plausibility of her backstory is the only thing that kind of bothered me. I'm pretty sure after threatning to kill everyone in the office, that legal action would of been taken and he would've been thrown in jail. Maybe i'll have to reread that part again for clarity. Anyways, bravo again on a superbly written story.

top 5 of the stories I have read on LW. Also top 5 writers I have read.

so 2 top fives deserve 5 *****s,,*****s

Thanks for the non cuck,, non tears in ur beer, slut wives at cabin, etc tail.

FIVE STARS *****s

nice story---sniff now where are those damn tissues

Whenever I have a bad day, I read this story and it gives me hope for all good things in the world again... Thank you.

Well-written, excellent story. Really enjoyed it. Five stars.

YEP 5 STARS AND I ENJOYED IT

Just heart-warming and nicely written. I read it every few months when things get me down. Instantly lifts my sprits.

A truly moving story -- perhaps the best I've ever read on Literotica. Really, really great.

Well crafted and well written! Thanks for an engaging story which had me sucked in and enjoying the story as it unfolded to its lovely ending.

Just the kind of story that lift your spirit, please continue to write. Your a natural.thank you, i feel good just reading this. Top 5 rating from me.

absolutely enjoyed it, thank you

Finally, a wonderfully written story from Literotica that would be suitable for people who might look askance at some of your other stories! It was a fabulous love story.

outstanding,,, better than 98k% of the so called tales written by so called writers to date.

5 stars*****************

Your story is of the quality of Romance story That you should continue to write with such quality and consider publishing with Harlequin or other such quality Publisher's.

Great story well written.

Find a movie producer and sell this. You'll both end up with 5 stars and very enhanced careers

Love sex, but not a pervert? This is just what the doctor ordered! Thank you Cat5. Yeah, I know sex sells; but talent is so much more enjoyable. The stroke stories are a dime a dozen and soon forgotten. I won't forget this.

Really enjoyed it. The way it was written drew me in and the characters were easy to relate to. All in all, a well crafted and wonderful story.

BRAVO!

It was well whritten and I cared what happened to both early on. I can relate to this story a bit. it didn't work out quite the same. But it did work out. And I think both of us are better for the experiance.

My first ever comment for any story because I really admire the writer.

The best story I have ever read, perfectly written. I would love to read many more stories of this writer.

Very nice, keep doing it for us please.

in existence on the literotica site

15 stars for this tale

super story

A HAND UP NOT HAND OUT. GRET STORY LOVED THE BEGINNING THE MIDDLE AND REALLY LIKED THE ENDING. VERY WELL WRITTEN AND THE INCREASING LOVE FACTOR MADE IT ALL WORK. 5 STARS NO WAY A LOT MORE THAN THAT. DO YOU HAVE A FOLLOW UP STORY ON THE COUPLE IF NOT YOU SHOULD HAVE IF YOU DO WHAT IS IT CALLED.

RON

PERFECT

You are a good story teller.

I have a new all time favourite story!

Funny heart breaking and loving. A true love story

Wonderful story of love tenderness and sex. There are only a few of you on this site and boy do your stories stand out. Well done

Amazing. 5/5 easy. Would have loved to see an epilogue though or maybe just a small extra chapter of their wedding night/honeymoon or something. It ended on a mountain top but I would have just loved it even more if it stayed there for a while to enjoy the view, you know?

Anyway - thanks alot for the story :)

Usually I'm more into longer stories multi chartered stories but this story is the best on ever. It has perfect amount of romance sex humor business so tht one doesn't supersede the other. KEEP WRITING STORIES!!!! 10/5 stars

A true romance story 5 stars plus. In my Romance A Favorite list. Ron. Texas. cowboyridecc@yahoo.com.

... in kindergarden, I knew a girl named Holly. She was my best friend. But that's another story.

I loved this. I'm not ... straight, but this story was perfect for me to read from start to finish. The guy was a perfect gentleman, and, to my relief, not a dick, and not dickless either. So rare to find in a guy. I know.

Or maybe I'm looking in the wrong places.

And I was so pleased to see Holly find her feet, and Phil not take advantage of her, and of her situation in life.

I mean, like, this whole story was perfect, and sweet, and easy, and wonderful, and happily ever after.

I wish every (life) story were this story, minus the jerk boy friend, and I was so happy to take the time to read this story, a real gem of a romance.

Thank you for writing it, Cat5

I really connected emotionally with this story. Maybe the best I have encountered here. You have a very real talent and I will definitely be reading more of your work. Thank you for sharing this. I'd like to think there really are guys like this out there. I'd like to think I might be half the man that your protagonist was.

Finally, a real love story. It is so nice to read about people who understand what real love is. This couple loved one another, I mean they really, really knew the meaning of Love. Thank You for a fantastic, entertaining and enjoyable story. Thank You, Thank You!

Absolutely amazing. As the title says, heart melting. This story captured the meaning of love.

The only thing that I found wrong with it, the fact I can't rate it higher than 5 stars.

Keep up the beautiful work.

Great story loved it

There are 4 different kinds of feedback/comment

1- the over the sky praise without telling you why

2- the high praise with comments

3- negative with feedback as to what you did not like

4- just a neutral did not like

5- negative putdown with no reason but is ignorant and rude to the author and other.

As I looked at the comments I noticed one thing very quickly, as is with any other writer's work

virtually all trash talk or worse all are from the same person Anonymous.

If you don't have the guts to step up and identify who you are, then I see why any author should take any of your observations serous.

Fucking. Awesome. :). I wasn't quite sure where you were going to go with the story, but was thrilled with the majority of it actually being a great story and not just filler for a lot of sex. ...and completely novel, haven't read anything like it here before, bravo! Thanks much for writing and sharing!

...as far as the commenter below, talking about the different types of comments and anon posters. ....the majority of posters on here are anon, not because they feel the need to hide, but because they feel no real reason or need to sign up as a user. They aren't writing and don't have a desire for the perks of being a user.

I have an account but haven't gotten around to posting anything Ive written as of yet, I dont really use favorites or any of the other perks either so honestly, I rarely need to be logged in.

I'll post a negative comment as anon or as my user name, it really doesn't matter anyway since its just a made up user name (thats oddly popular for some reason since Ive been on numerous sites and its already taken there) so its not like I would be 'hiding' by using anon since nobody knows who I am even if Im logged in.

The only time I really intentionally use anon is if Im dishing personal information in relation to a story and I wouldn't want the one in a billion chance of someone I actually know that knows the user name to be able to profile me and realize that their neighbor, friend, fill in the blank, has this kink or that, had such in such personal trauma, had X relationship problem with spouse, etc.

...anyway you get my point, people aren't necessarily hiding. That doesn't change the fact that a douche asshat commenter isn't a douche asshat ;)

Cheers!

found myself reading this again; probably the third time and it's still a great little story. Note the emphasis - STORY; this is not for the stroke story community. Yes there's sex but it is part of a well written, quite believable bit of work. Cat5 wrote a cohesive love story about a couple of decent people thrown together by circumstances who, in the end, win; nice to read a "good guy - good girl" story every now and then.

Is it a perfect offering? One of "the best on here"? No. There are a few authors on Literotica who truly are wordsmiths; I have 4 or 5 favourites who never fail to blow me away every time they post a new story. Cat5 wasn't there yet but is certainly in my Favourites and I search for something by him every time I sign in. I'll continue to do so.

Sadly it seems we'll never see how good Cat5 could have been as he (or she) appears to have ceased writing, or at least posting on Literotica. Too bad for us but life can distract or redirect in a heartbeat so I for one say Thank You for your work and my enjoyment.

I have read this story more than 4 times and i still love it even more.it has great flow of ideas.its a real romance story .i love it ✴5

The ability to spin a tale---Dinsmore talking here---is so in demand! Don't stop writing.

It was a very pleasant read. Not crammed with sex and confused with too many characters. Just well fleshed out hero and his girl.

Thank you,

asianToy

I can't say much over what has been said. You have a terrific ability to tell a story...about people, their lives, you throw some believable sex into the story and show us some compassion. Don't stop writing.

Just a superb story.

Thank you.

As to auhunter04......go fuck yourself you utter moron.

as of 2005 all anon comments have been positive bar 1....thats right just one you insecure little toad.

Did it ever cross your pathetic mind that not everyone wants to sign up to the site.

I noticed that yours was the only comment with nothing mentioned about the story.

If people want to write shit and post it, there can be no surprise when it gets negative feedback.

Kudos to the sites owner for allowin anonymous feedback.

See above.

I've read this four or five times. I just can't get tired of it. Great story and a great job. Thank you for sharing this.

true/real/actual 5 star tale from you are one of the few real/true 5 star talers

I agree with the laudatory comments. On a scale of 1 > 5, you score at least a 15, because your writing in this story is at least 3 times as good as the best of others.

Yes, you have a few typos. Yes, you make your characters come alive.

Thank you.

I just can't get over the great writers you have on this site.

Wow great just great this is one of my favorites

I just couldn't get enough of this story. As a reader, this is exactly the kind of story I enjoy. Of course, if you knitpick you can find spelling and other errors, which quality proof reading and editing will certainly clear. I rated this five stars because I thoroughly enjoyed it.

I have a ton of extra time on my hands and reading helps to pass it. I read of lot of the stories on this site and every now and them I am pleasantly surprised by the talent of the writers. This story is one of the rare gems here. Thank you for sharing and please keep writing.

Great story and ending 5+ stars

Thanks

Tony NZ

Great every time. :)

by anyone. One of my all time favorites, by any author. Please, take your time writing, and produce another of this quality.

It may have a few glitches, but nothing serious. A great blend of 'building a relationship', as well as keeping a storyline growing throughout the plot. Even the ending showed closure to the entire plot. TY!

I thoroughly enjoyed this well-written story that follows a creative approach to writing.

Highly recommend it to all!!

I loved this story. I am adding it to my favorites.

What can I say, the previous comments tells it all. Loved it..well done..

This is a great story, one of my favorites.

This story was so good I really only skimmed over the sex scenes, as I wanted to get to the Sales Team's relationship.

Congratulations, Best of the best.

Gave you 5 stars = 10

THIS IS A GREAT STORY! THANK YOU FOR WRITING IT!

Dinsmoors' tale of; A MAN AMONG WOMEN

5 stars

Loved the story .. Liked the "who's the boss?" statements

Loved the smart business decisions ..... and the delay in physical relationship ...

One improvement ... You didn't mention use of condom(s) he had in his room ... with a lady who probably couldn't afford birth control pills ...

I usually love to read incest stories, but this story, which actually I read by mistake, changed all my perception that only incest are more erotic. It's really a more than awesome story. loved it

I loved it despite the sparsity of sex scenes.

how long until we see the sequel in the divorce section of loving wives?

OK, call me cynical.

How could you rain on such a warm and caring story? I know that we all have opinions but right out of the gate you are talking about divorce I do agree there should be a sequil but one about there happy life together.In my favorites.

Ron

cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

Cynical first use spell checker. I'm confused divorce??? where did that come from?

timlauder@yahoo.com Cat5 hasn't written since 2008 or am I not seeing all the stuff here?

and liked it again !

Great story; I didn't read it for a long time because the title didn't appeal to me. But the story was well developed, well written and really had a first-class conclusion. Keep it up!

Damn I love this story!! I was searching for some new stuff and saw the title way over on the right side of the page under suggestions and my eyes lit up immediately :). I hadn't read it in a while but I couldnt resist hitting it again! ;)

I am always perturbed by pithy comments on a wonderful story that we get to read free. Offer to be an editor for Heavens sake (as I gave done in the past). Cat5 if you are still out there, the editor offer stands. Get in touch. Doctime.

5 stars

have I read this now. A great story that deserves its 5 stars

tween you, web spinner, the stang, s w hermitt, and a handfull others; there exists some mighty enjoyable readings on line. I read and reread and vote and revote 5 stars every time.

thanks for your fantastic tales.

Very good indeed. You are more than a writer, you are an Author, (or Authoress). These days I find it difficult to concentrate on a book but not in this case; I was drawn in and enjoyed your story very much. I will say three things: First, in a Romance story sex does not need to be explicit, subtle may work better. Second, marriage is not the final prize, some will agree and some will not. Your job is to make them both happy; Leave an ending that hints at a future but don't risk it all by bringing the "M" word into it. Third, Write a novel, get it published, write a sequel. You are good.

a truly wonderful story if only the whole could be like your story , how good it would be. thankyou

A really good story that turned into a funny caring and love story.

I would liked to see a sequil about Phil and Holly.

Ron. Texas

cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

I absolutely loved this story, the warmth ,the humour and caring love and sex.

Keep up the good work.

I like that story.

It found place on my bookmarks row for owerreading.