All Comments on 'Sales Team'

Had tears in my eyes reading the last page. Truly amazing piece of writing! 10 stars for me.

to find a tale better than this one.

Cat5, S W Hermit, Web Spinner are in my" BEST OF BEST" favorite story talers.

A great story.

Cant have enough of this beautifull and well written story. 5 stars so far.

Chapeau!!!

I've loved this story from the first moment I read it, hence the reason it's in my favorite's list...great job!

MoogPlayer

Certainly one of the best stories on this site.

Very well written erotica.

Good depiction of a loving couple working together as a team. That is what it is all about.

This is definitely one of the most well written stories I have seen on this site. Not too short, and not too long, and most importantly... left me wanting more.

Could easily see another chapter in the future, however, as well as it is written, it doesn't really need one. Doesn't mean I don't want one. *Hint Hint*

Really loved this story! ~ However it might have benefited from some more romantic conflict such as another man luring/tempting Holly ,Phil thinking he may have lost her,but her being true to him. (Just my opinion.)

Truly absorbing and enjoyable story, written by an author who excels in the craft.

The premise of thestory was the best I've read on these pages. But what find very heartening wzs your grammar, not one error that I recall.becauze of thst, I will read you again.

As this is the second story of yours that I've read, I was still surprised at how well it was written AND executed. I've also read 'My Irish Virgin'. Since they both were done so well (spelling, syntax, christ I could go on but I'll stop there), I've made 'Sales Team' a favorite as well as made you a favorite author. If anything was 'wrong' about this story, I'd say that you bordered on corny but you didn't go over the edge, either. So, in conclusion, I'll be back to read more!!!

I love the fact that, while noticing and appreciating Holly's physical beauty, Phil was focused on seeing Holly as a total person. You did not waste words telling us her breast size or the size of the Phil's penis but, instead, showed us Holly's insecurities and strengths. I also saw their relationship as a model of what a true loving relationship should be: two people with different personalities and strengths who support and build each other up rather than tear each other down because of their differences. Thank you for understanding the difference between erotica and pornography and choosing to write the former. More, please!

This is one very well written, enjoyable, and entertaing story. One of the best on Literotica.

outstanding 5 stars

One of the best stories I've read for a long time

So enjoyable after reading for the second time. Five stars & kudos!

loved it thank you five stars.

I got fed up reading through the comments trying to find a 'bad' one.. I could not find one.

I am not sure if you are still reading these but this is one of my favorite stories and I hope you stopped posting on a free site because you are making money for your work. If you are publishing for cash let me know and I will buy ..... 5 stars

I am going to try some more of your works and hope they are as good.

Ed Grocott

edgrocott@gmail.com

Outstanding!!!!! I have been visiting this site for about twenty years and enjoyed many a story from many different authors. This is the best romantic story that I have read. Not an experience one would necessarily expect to find on a "sex story'" site. Over the fifty-five years of joyful reading that I been blessed to have been immersed in, more than a few romantic stories (including novels) have gratefully crossed my path.

This story ranks up there with the best. A great story line, marvelous characters, thoughtful and engaging development of plot line, what more could be asked from an author. I would certainly hope that the author has (or will) turn a hand to writing professionally (in any genre of personal choice).

N.B. This is my very first comment (on any story in any category for this site).

Best story ever! The only caveat I will add to that compliment is that I know it is very possible I will read something better when I go through the rest of your stories!

I really enjoyed reading this story. Well written and presented. Thanks.

Not everyone will have a chance to be a hero in someone else's life, glad I could read this accounting. I need to look and see if you have anything new here, good luck topping a wonderful story.

Well written with a beautiful story line. Keep writing - you're too good not to!

This is one time that a five star rating just isn't high enough.

Thanks for a real story that took it's time for the people to get to know each other and develop a connection before jumping in the sack. Thanks for a story where Phil was not only putting Holly's needs before his wants, but honest enough to give credit where it was due. A man and a woman whose smarts, honesty, loyalty, caring, and talent are to be admired.

Think about writing a second on this. Like the sales team trip

What a great story - keep writing please, you have talent! A continuation of this story would be greatly appreciated.

.....and I STILL love it !!

The way he looked after her was excellent - that's the way to do it !!

Cat 5 - this is a stunningly good story - maybe your Best ?

Thanks for writing it. 5 Stars ( of course )

I wasn't sure I'd like the story at the beginning... Phil seemed pretty darned pushy, and came off 'kinda creepy'. I don't think that a girl who's fallen on hard times, and in a vulnerable albeit desperate situation, would let her guard down around a pushy dude like that. But thankfully, as the story continued, Phil developed a more approachable, human side that seemed more appealing.

I also wondered about Phil's neighbor, and Holly's friend, Carol. In a real-world situation like this, upon her return, Carol would have been quickly included. She'd be looking out for her friend, especially as she felt bad about missing Holly's arrival. Perhaps at the start, Phil could have attempted to reach Carol by phone (as they were 'good friends' - contact information for the impending trip home might have been exchanged), to explain the situation, and in so doing, could tell her not to worry; that Holly was in good hands. That would also have put Holly at ease early on, and perhaps would have provided a better springboard from which to launch the rest of the romance.

Still, I found the story entertaining. 4 stars.

I've been reading on Literotica for years and this was, hands down, the best I've read. Excellent story, no spelling errors and great grammar! Thank you!

I usually do not like protracted stories but this was a good one. Enjoyed it. Smooth all the way.

Something the wife would like!

I think I could print this out and she would read it. She's not much on the sexy part but it's not over-the-top either. It was a really easy to read and stay with.

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As a salesman and a romantic this story was awesome. I was a little worried it might some how go wrong at the end. But you brought it together perfectly. Oh how I love a happy ending.

Totally enjoyable and sweet. Thank you for this story. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Loved it from the beginning to the ending.

Truly enjoyable reading from beginning to end. So well written, with appealing characters that really come to life. Look forward to reading much more of this author's work.

Still one of the very best stories.

Most of the business themed writing misses the mark so badly as to be funny. As someone who has lived for forty years on my ability to sell, I can tell you this could happen.

And then it is sexy and erotic as hell. Really appreciate this one.

The best story I have read on Literotica.

As a businessman with more than 30 years experience, I can say I Love This Story! Deeply patterned and richly detailed, the characters come to life and develop beautifully! I read this story...5 (?) years ago, and loved it as much then. WELL DONE!

Cat5, this has all the elements that a great story needs! Thanx for an outstanding read.

BDEarth

One of the best story. Hope to read more from You.

l've read this 3 times now, it's one of my favorites, up there with "charity begins next door" and Irish Eyes.

Absolutely loved it!!!

Sure hope you consider a sequel!

I love this story!

You write it all the feelings inside one tale. Charity, love, honesty and hope (and a little lust)!

This story needs a sequel telling how is they life working as a married couple.

5* for you!

Great Job!

I love this story!! Nothing else to say about this.....really.... Nothing can sum it up better!! Good job....keep up the good work!!👍

I thought this was a btb story. Should be in romance not loving wives. No cheating, etc. Beautiful rescue beautiful relationship. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.

My third time reading this story, and I love it more each time. And it made me cry again. Great combination of real romance and great sex. Keep it coming!

Wonderful! Thank you. Jntiques

This is definitely one of the best Romance stories I have read here. The Romance makes the story more enjoyable but I would like to Read another chapter of the story perhaps one where they are on the road to their Wedding.

Very well presented

Well written. Smooth flowing story. Great presentation. Very enjoyable reading.

I HAPPENED TO READ THIS ONE EARLIER BUT WHEN I COME ACROSS THIS ONCE AGAIN IT REFRESHED MY MEMORY OF A GOOD READING I HAD.AND TEMPTED TO READ AGAIN. ONE OF THE MANY VERY GOOD STORIES I HAVE READ.

A Berry good Story!CB1E

Wonderful story. Keep it up. I would like to to say that i really enjoyed reading your story and i would also like to read your other stories. I really enjoyed 100%

An absolutely *wonderful* heart-warming story. Write more stories! You have a magnificent gift that should be shared with the world.

One of the best stories. Great characters.

I don't know what it is about this story that compels someone ordinarily attracted almost exclusively to stories in the incest/taboo section, but this story checks all my boxes as to what a great story should be.

Romance, conflict, love, togetherness, and of course, sex.

All mixed together with a dash of hope, a spoonful of warmth, and a pinch of laughter.

This has to be one of the few stories on here that I would not mind paying a pretty penny for. (coming from me, that's high praise.)

Overall, a great story and one that sets the bar pretty high for imitators. I wish I could rate higher than 5 stars.

Without question or doubt, this is the best Romantic story on this site and in the top ten of all the stories in all categories!

I started reading this and as the plot thickened between the two characters I found that no matter how hard I tried to stop reading,even to go for a cup of coffee, I continued on. This story was well written in a way that keeps your interest. I enjoyed reading this immensely.I have read many stories on this sight, but this is the only one that I have ever given a 5 rating to. Thank you for the great story

In my favorites. I have read this story numerous times and enjoy it each time a little more. If I am not mistaken it is in L W myself I think it should be in Romance. I would like to see a follow up story on these two people. 5. Stars plus

Ron/cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

one of the "a few excellent tales" on this site

This was actually a really amazing story, and adorable from start to end. You somehow made a sexy story have a plot and that's really great

Well, written...interesting story...brought out my romantic side.

My favorite story in all of literotica.

Pretty sure this is my favorite story on this site. Wish the author was still contributing...

I have read this a couple of times. It never fails to charm me. Well written, and a real imaginative tale, with a great balance of lust and warmth. Also a favorite of mine.

I felt like I was with both of you throughout the story. Only gifted writers can do that. As I read, I was with you; I could see you in my mind. Congratulations

A good story I hope that the author can do more stories. It is was believable throughout. It is captivating, delayed what I was intending to do finish reading it.

I fell in love with this story the first time I ever read it. Now it's I my "Favorites List" so that I can read it whenever I want to. Thanks, Cat5; great job!

MP

A couple meet, learn to work together, are courteous, respect each other, and then fall in love.

Thanks for a well written short story documenting a romance.

Page 4 - Champaign is a city in Eastern Illinois. Champagne is a sparkling white wine. Get right!! Other than a few typo errors, a good story.

I agree with Visualization. A really lovely love story

Wonderful theme, good plot, perfect length, well paced, and excellent writing.

This should be made into a movie, it was fantastic

I used to work for a company that did things the way Phil's did, present stuff to the customer telling them that it was what the customer wanted. Mostly they got it wrong. US car companies used to be known for doing that. Back in the days when GM cars had a 60% share of the US market, before Japanese cars really hit the market in the US.

and also the second...

really likable well-developed characters...superb!

Well developed characters that grow a loving relationship. I hope he we get to see their trip to the islands. And I really, really hope there will be a story about Mary.

And I loved it AGAIN.

Well Done, Please do more like this, A follow up in Maui or the Company Annual get together would be great.

Great story with unexpected turns.Basily a love story, loved it.Different from usual erotic fare, glad found this one.This would make great.movie for Own or Lifetime channels.Thanks for marvelous read..

One of the few stories I reread.

Let me count the ways (with apologies to Elizabeth Barrett Browning for stealing her lines).

What a delightful treasure! A lovely romance to pass some time on a grey day. Thanks so much, going in my favorites!

Every time I read it this story gets better and better. I'm a foodie so the ways the food is described made my mouth water more than once. Good storyline and flow and great ending.

Love this very much😡

Yes a re-read. Yes it is still a great story. Yes I cracked up again over Mary's punchline. Yes it is still a 5 star story only because the site doesn't allow higher.

you are in my fav's and fav author

I wish I could put ten stars for this exquisitely written story. I'm looking forward to more from this author.

4th time reading this in the last two years. Just as good, if not better each read!

Loved each sentence and the way it was written. Hope there is more chapters on this to follow real soon

Probably one of my favorite stories on LIT - re-read it again and again.

Just a bunch of likable characters you can't help, but root for.

Goddammit, Cat 5 - why did you stop writing?! You were one of the best around here - come back to us!!!

This was one story that has 'can't put it down' quality. I can't quite put my finger on what precisely is so good with it but I for one hope you continue to write with the same passion that this story has. Write some more and enjoy....I certainly will.

Warm, and hot! Fabulous story!!!

I've read this story several times, it gets better. Thanks Author, love you. Please write again.

Johnny

I hate just stories about sex, makes them cheap, where as this is a short novel may be a chapture or 2 more just to stop it being a Happy ever after, thats how a child's book ends.