All Comments on 'Sales Team'

Love this one. Again! It’s my favourite reread!!

Five Stars

Thank you, this was a gift......

SIX STARS

I needed a good story about good people, so I re-read this one. Mission accomplished.

A very good story from a very good writer! Please return with some new stories or at least let us know you are still out there. There are a few cases where bonus stars are needed. Thank you for your effort.

I must have done something right today. This is the second story about a down and out woman who found love. I think these are actually my favorite type. No cuck. No btb. Just two broken humans reaching out and finding love.

Very well written. As predictable as Christmas and just as heart warming.

Great story

This was a fun story! I came across it because it was in the "Similar Stories" list of one of mine. 5*.

He didn't even fix her a bowl of eggs.....

I loved this story! Ok. I'm a believer (follower).

Very touching and very arousing. You made the images come alive in my imagination. Well done

I’m a sucker for a happy ending...🥰 5

Came back to rate it.

Loved it, as I do many of your stories.

Yes I enjoyed this story, usually my favorite reads are some build up or plausible scenarios that feed fantasy or fetish of some kind, not necessarily mine because I enjoy understanding what turns others on. I really enjoyed this story about them building a wonderful relationship together with just enough of the description of their sexual relationship. Great read. Thanks

Great story! Loved it. Sucker for stories with happy people.

I really enjoyed your story and appreciate your writing style. The weekly change in agenda was a clever way to develop their relationship. The only thing I didn't like was the abrupt introduction of anal sex. It seemed out of place in this relationship and I would doubt that this smart young woman would draw target circles on her ass with a permanent red marker if she had a virgin ass. But other than that, congrats and well done!

Two good people ending happy and together makes a great romance story

I kept waiting for the shoe to fall and bring it all down but, thankfully, it never did. Thank you for writing a story about nice people who do nice things for one another. Too bad they limit ratings to only five stars - LOL!

Just awesome! Wonderful story. Makes you feel tingly!

Great ending, good plot & well done everything.

5 stars

Bill

A good story but 4 stars cause it seemed just a little sappy!

Always love a good romance story of two people who make each other better. Excellent story.

Really well done. Even a crusty old guy like me enjoyed it. Top Marks.

Legit, this would make a great movie

My New Favorite story. I kept thinking that something was going to happen and Phil would end up loosing Holly. I was very glad that it ended the way it did. They could even use the Maui meeting as a free honeymoon.

Loved it

Fantastic. By one of the great writers here and never fails to give me enjoyment. The end was a little fast but minor compared withe the rest of the story. Definitely one of my favourites.

Well written but a bit long. The sex should have started earlier.

champain?? us english, i´d say...

somewhat corny?...

First it is a great love story from beginning to the end marriage. Clearly you thought out the complete story and molded the characters to the story line perfectly. Will add you as a follower and check out some of your earlier stories. Clearly one of the most enjoyable I have read in a long time. Thank you

Sweet. Superb .

Loved it.

Kudos.

More such please

Regards

Heart warming and wonderful. A tale of triumph and success. Could us a little more sex but still 5/5.

An excellent story of love and passionate romance, with A minimum erotic content😀

I have enjoyed this story a couple of times as anonymous. This is a fantastic feel good story and is well written!!! Thank You for sharing this wonderful story!

I don’t know if you still monitor replies. No matter. First, the story is brilliant! I guess, since you have written in 11 years, I’m a little late to the party, but that’s not unusual for me. I’m glad it’s still here for all of us, especially me. It’s what I needed today. Well done and thank you.

i really enjoyed this story from start to finish. real life, down to earth, the 'key' being believable. Cat, don't change your writing if this is a sample of it. The best fiction is fiction that is believable which makes the story enjoyable. I will now attempt to follow up on your other stories if available. JK

This was a wonderful read, a great feel-good story. At one point I was worried that Holly's success would drive a wedge between them. But Phill wasn't jealous, he wanted what was best for Holly and Holly wanted Phill. How does that saying go about nice guys finishing, where? 5 stars

One of my favorites on here! Well written, original storyline! Thank you for a delightful read!

I love this story. Two people who deserve each other.

5 stars ... strong character develolment, romantic and realistic.

Wonderful, well paced, thoughful, kind and sexy........

Thank yoy

I see this is a contest winner. Well deserved. And enjoyed!

Favorited. Thanks for sharing! 5* Slainté

ok ...with caveats.

This was a big step for Nancy and I ???... grammar! a big step for i??

bottle of Champaign?? ´murrican drink?

I really liked this story...second read.

why do i read this shit?...one star is way too many...

Finally, a great one.

I love a good story that leads into amazing sexual experiences! This was one I could truly picture in my head and feel (how stories should be) . I could not put it down and was eager to find out the ending. Kudos to your talent

It's was a good story but I don't think this was the place for it . I could be wrong but I think people who come to this place to read a story want a bit more from what they read here. But I must say it was one of the best written stories I have read.❗

This story was great. 10/10

Words don't do this story justice, absolutely stunning and such an incredible work! You have an amazing talent for writing and thank-you for sharing!

cooorny 'merrican

What's not to love about a very good love story...............

Five stars - and five boxes of Kleenex :-)

I love this story...

OH WOW AMAZING (sorry to spoil it but dessert is spelt wrongly

You know, it' super refreshing to read a story like this, the sexual tension and naughtiness is in there, as to be expected on this site, but it's wrapped up in such a heartwarming little story with two characters you genuinely come to like. Well done.

A great story, one I've enjoyed many times. Would love to see something new but after all this time it probably won't happen - our lose for sure. 5 stars.

somewhere east of Omaha

Fuck Phil. Ofc things worked out well in the end but i feel her potential was stifled from the start, recognizing her grades and abilities. Undertone of the story was unenjoyable bc of it.

Great story thanks .. I really enjoyed it ..

Add another chapter please

Very well put together, great plot progression and character development, I absolutely loved it! 5*

When I need a pickup , this and Irish Eyes do the trick. Wonderful. TC ireland.

Great story with a nice 'Feel Good' end. But why Anal? That is revolting.

Great feel-good story.

5/5

OK. I'm a male and don't do romance. (I know, typical male). However: I do believe you knocked this one out of the park. Wish I cold give you more than 5.

Wonderfully written. Nice mix of kindness , compassion and sex! As one whose been lifted from desperation i truly enjpyed it. Fiction or not

OMG what a wonderful story.

Sentimental, sexy and full of surprises!

From start to finish enjoyment flourished!

A really, really great story. Love it from start to finish. AAAAAAA++++++

A simple, happy success story ... made me tear up. 5 star.

I love this story. I've read it 3 or 4 times now. It just makes me feel good. Five blazing stars, plucked from the firmament...

I smiled and giggled to most of this story, especially at the end. Guess I lost some man points with the giggles! Second or third read was even better than the first. Good writing!

Better the second time through. Added to favorites.

Write more please.

One of the best stories I have read in a long time.

A feel good story and an enjoyable read.

Mike the Irishman 🍀

Excellent "tear jerker". Only problem Phil mentioned his dozen condoms but yet he had unprotected sex with a woman that was undoubtedly not on birth control.

very readable. unfortunately the author doesn't know the difference between to lie and to lay. as well, the dreaded off of creeps in. plus, the odd superfluous of as well. three stars is generous. these are all junior high MAJOR errors.

I loved the story, it was interesting and kept me captivated. The only negative is that I believe it was much too short. I really REALLY wanted to read more...

Nice......

This is a very good tale, I've read it several times. If only there were some NEW stories to go with it! Thanks Cat, where ever you are! 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

Hmm very nice story, I personally would have like a longer telling of their tale. Married, Superstars with the Company, end up with a big house etc..., She gets pregnant and the Company scared of losing her - offers her and him Special packages. She can work from a a full home office, and when baby (or babies) grows old enough a full time Nanny so she can make the business calls. Also extensive use of Zoom and both do bi-annual trips to head office for debriefing etc.. Maybe close on a second pregnancy where she has twins!

What a wonderful story. I wish to God I find someone like Holly to spend the rest of my life with!

Beautiful story

Too good Nd mixes with real life scenes. Thank you author

This is one of my favorite stories. I hope te see more from you. Thank you so much for writing it :)

""The company is doing things backward. They are guessing what the customer wants and then they go to the customer and tell them this is what they want. If you went into the field with me for three days we could visit twenty or more customers and they would tell you what they really want."

Perhaps somebody should tell that to Apple, Amazon, Google and all the rest!

I get totally 'pi**ed off every time they make an 'improvement' that upsets what I need to do, because it wrecks documents, or Programs that I've painstakingly created!

Terrific story, I gave it five stars.

Besides the quality of the writing (although dessert was misspelt) I've always liked stories set in a business environment.

Pity Carol never came over, or they to Carol. I think that would have added something to the story. This teetotal vegan was a bit shocked by the amount of alcohol and meat that they were putting away, but I guess it didn't really affect the story.

i love the ending 😭😭😭

Ok, I'm a softy and loved this one, but why oh why does the hero always have to fall for a beauty - I'd like to see a average looking girl win for a change (wife Linda's idea!) - or at least make the hero worker before getting into her panties! Off the soapbox now - terrific story both times I've read it.

I loved this story, wasn't overboard with sex and it was just like a good story. I hope they write more.

This was very obviously written by someone in IT. Attractive elements were written in pragmatic form, and everything was depicted in procedural, linear terms. Not only that, you’ve managed to insert your personal gripes with modern business, and enact a true fantasy of bosses listening to you and giving you money, which is even more outrageous than the woman.

Not a very hot but I loved reading it.

I laughed. I cried. I cheered. Well done.

My second, or is 3 reads? No matter, I am sure tomread it again at some point. This couple, your writing, had me on a cloud, firmly believing that yes, there are still good people out there. Thank you!

Satisfying story, but the male protagonist was too controlling. I expected Holly to pay him off and strike out on her own.

“… the red wine open and breathing, …” Red wine cannot "breathe" in the bottle; it needs to be decanted, or at least poured into a wide glass.

Excellent, well laid out and well written. A joy to read.

Great story. Love the ATL setting...

Outstanding!