All Comments on 'Sales Team'

Second reading, 5 stars again. What else can I say!

Freaking beautiful!!!!! One of the greatest love stories ever seen on this, the hard core cuck site. Surprised the faggots moderating the site haven't taken this gem down since there are no willing cucks involved

Great story appreciated the content due to the focus being centered on a story about two people with everyday issues and problems. First time that the sex was sort of in the way of the the story. Really one of the best stories yet. Hope you can continue to present stories like this.

Wonderful story. Well done!

I'm only popping back to say I am no longer Anonymous. I gave it 5* on the first read and have reread it several times since. This is my go to story if I need a little bit of support to feel better, an honestly it's my favourite story. Gold standard writing.

Exceptional! You have a very real talent for story telling. The story was so good I read right through without pause. Thank you!

Good build up, and nice to see one of the downtrodden people of the world get a happy ending-and not that kind!! The best stories on Lit are the love stories, and this is a great one.

Wonderful story and story telling. Nice to see a couple get together without a major disaster/misunderstanding after they’ve met.

This story is like a fine wine 🍷. Taste better as it ages.

Man, at several points I teared up.

FANTASTIC STORY!! HOLLY WAS A GRATEFUL WARM INTELLIGENT CHARACTER. AT LEAST SHE DID NOT BECOME HIS COMPETITION IN THE WORK WHEN HIS BOSSES MADE HER THE OFFER!

AT LEAST WE DID NOT HAVE TO READ ABOUT ANYONE FLIRTING WITH HER WHILE TEACHING THEM.

WELL WRITTEN

TOO tell the truth I would love to read more of your works of art Honestly loved every bit of it And that comes from an old man of 63 Thank you very much

Always feel good after reading this story. Must be 5th time or more. One of the few stories where not one word or idea needs changing. TC Ireland.

Awesome story!!!

Really good one.. So heartwarming and touching

Eventually, I left the bar and went to the grocery store. Two huge steaks, baking potatoes, sour cream, butter, and the ingredients for a salad seemed to be the right combination. now known as the heart attack dinner lol

ok, but imperfect english...

A nice story with a happy ending.

Now that was a great story

One of my favorites on this site. Well done.

Loved it. Left me feeling good.

A very nice, feel good romance. Well done!

i love this story . it was very well thought out . i would love for this story to go on forever

Excellent writing style; smooth, easy reading and comprehension, and a very enjoyable and positive tale... felt real. Frankly, enjoyed the acquaintance and love story portions better than the erotica!

Needs illustrations to go with this gem. No computers generated art, thou.... a decent artist of DC comics quality level would do.

It is very rare that I comment on a story and when I do it will have the highest rating I can give it. I have also read this story twice which I have never done before. This is a great story of love blossoming with a technical twist. Quite original.I will have to check out some more of this author's works again.

Thanks

enjoyed it thoroughly! but..."brought over a bottle of Champaign"???

Wow! GREAT story! Thank you for that! I can't say I can really even offer any constructive criticism. This was actually a wonderful excited story that drew me into the characters, wanting to know where they were at on a level that I have not found to be common place with online erotica. And yet, while not delivering into anything hardcore, still contained an apple sex aspect. I am very impressed. Well done.

Loved this story! Needed a feel good story with a happy ending after reading one sad story after another.

Loved it. A great read, that held my attention from start to finish. 5 stars and a big Tank You for sharing it with us.

Great story. Nice to see good people succeed and build a life. It was easy to stay interested all the way through and see what came next for them. Thanks for the good read.

Best story on the site.

Just a BIG DITTO to that the other good things others said about this story, it had it all - GOOD! 5 Stars.

That was one of the best stories I’ve read on this site ever. What a beautiful love story, thank you!

Excellent!!! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Great actually better than great! Second read, an story about life not just sex. The best I have had the privilege of reading.

The story was well written in my opinion and It seemed to followed an orderly story line. I just enjoyed this author’s style and how he approached the story. I will keep an eye out for the next submission.

I’ve actually known a couple guys that hired assistants out of their own pockets to free up their time. It is fraught with perils of liability etc. but for both of them it worked well.

Love the sexy romance. Well done

Mary would have said, "I guess this bozo ain't as dumb as he looks!" LOL

thax for that i needed a good one

This is exactly what great erotica writing is all about. Loved it!!!

5 stars for sure ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️❤️

The best story I have read so far, well done!

Romantique, Sweet, und Uplifting!

11/10 Service Manuals!!!!!

Fantastic in EVERY Way!!!

What can I say, the second time around is as good or better..

I love a well written feel good story. Thank You

Very enjoyable story.

This has to as one of the best storie I have read on Literotica.

Beautiful story simple and elegant

What a great feel-good story, really enjoyed it

Great story .well done.

This is the fourth time I have read this - brilliant, heartwarming story, thank you.

Best story I have read so far, well done.

Fantastic story. I read it twice, may read it again.

About 2 pages too long. There isn't enough here to justify the length. The editors on here have no balls.

Next chapter of this amazing story

Excellent story

Wonderful story. Thank you for that. I feel like a success after reading that. Congratulations!

ok, though formulaic and somewhat corny, at least for me. keep writing!

Great story, love a happy ending

Great story I feel good after reading that love a happy ending

Love this

I come back and read this every couple of months. Once of the best stories I have ever read in my life! And I read 2-3 hours a day every day.

Wow, this was a very beautiful story <3

Very well put together, smooth to read, excellent characters

Magnificent!

So nice. Love to read once more.

This story is so different every time I read it. Fancy having a chamelion favourite story!

Fabulous story.

A sweet story. Thank you

A true knight saving his Cinderella. Great story. Thank you.

Just read the first page and I cant wait anymore and I gotta say, Phil is getting on my nerves. Let the bloody woman speak and stop interrupting

Author, hell of a story. A movie adaptation of this would be phenomenal like Me Before You...but the first iteration if Phil is still the same, annoying interruption but ging towards the end, I liked him. In fact, them together is the good way to go. But what happened to Carol? Just outta the way now?

As a fan of this kind of story, saving the damsel in distress, I thought this to be an exceptional twist on some of the other stories that I have read.

As to comments about Phil "interrupting", I understand their point, but understand the nuance you were creating.

Keep up the good work!

The range of emotions I felt with this story and Holly's character is insane. I felt the pain of her past, skeptical halfway through if she's even being honest or lying to get ahead, and then overwhelming joy not only for their engagement ending, but for the respect given to her in her job. Very well done Author!

Mary's voice boomed over the two of us. "I guess this bozo isn't as dumb as he looks."

Ruined it

Thank you for sharing your work!

Being an incurable romantic, I loved it! Good story, kept me interested right through.

Fun story. Solid 4 stars.

Champagne is a sparkling wine.

Champaign is a city in Illinois.

Great story.

There’s a common reason many arrive hear to read certain stories.

This one was very refreshing, about two good people who ended up together with a little spice in the bedroom. Too many are just about sex, which at the right time is ok.

But other times I’d like to read a story, not a Penthouse Letters.

Thanks for the time and effort you’ve put into this.

Great all round story! Thank you.

What can I say about this story? Simple, it's great! 5 Stars!!!

Brilliant!

Excellent story. Too bad it has been over 14 years since this Author has submitted a story. I would favorite this Author if current, too bad, I loved this story! 5 BIG AND FAT BRIGHT SHINNING STARS! Thank you Cat5.

5 stars!!!!!! GREAT story!!! This would make a great movie. Loved every word!!!

I cam here just hoping to jerk off and be done and instead my heart got jerked instead and I just stayed up 2 more hours than intended finishing this... I love this story

This story was AWESOME!!! Very different from all the others I've read but also probably the best one I've read...

This is my second reading of this story and it is beyond excellent. It has substance, character and interesting information. I thought I had left a comment when I read it the first time but I cannot find it now in your site. Maybe I was too impressed and stunned by the story to write anything then! In any case, this is a masterpiece worth two rating scales of 5* each, end to end. Please continue this story and make it into a full book offered on Amazon through my contact, Jay.

BJ

Best I have read since I found literotica. More please!

An absolutely story

I read this story again every now and then.

Enjoy it every time.

Cheers

fun!...

This is also my second reading of this story. One of the very best on this platform. 5 stars agsin.

I really loved this story. It had a good hearted upbeat theme to the story, that left you feeling happy at the end..

An excellent story. 10/10

Wow, this is one of the best stories I’ve read. Easily top 3 favorite. The plot was wonderful and it was well-written. I want a sequel!

Still the best on this site. Hope you are well and happy

Incredable storytelling and creativity. The story flowed quite well and kept me anxious for the next line. Very well done.

I have to agree with RePhil. I keep rereading this story.