All Comments on 'Sandy Steps Out Ch. 03'

. . . the way this chapter ended, holding hands while driving home both wrestling with knowledge. Beware the fruit of the tree of knowledge for it can be a bitter fruit. I have long thought one of the most intimate actions a couple can share is to hold hands with some sense of tender togetherness.

One of the problems with presenting a story this way, very short one scene only chapters, is that the story takes forever to tell on a one chapter at a time basis. I just read all three chapters in less than ten minutes. This much material would have made a good start to a story as first post.

Just my thoughts on presentation.

for physical joy. What to choose, TK U MLJ LV NV

WHAT A WIMP!!!

Move along people nothing to see here.

he was able to convey his sadness to Sandy. He evened up the score a little. I would like some history. Is this her first time cheating? His? Flesh it out some.

imho, write the whole story first, then post.

get a divorce and not have an open marriage... This couple is only sharing a house and not a Home... They do not have a future...

Boring!

she cheated, he cheated, both know, no love really. Not even good sex.

No marriage there, maybe another chapter to develop some tension, but both cheated and she wants to continue...the "I still love you" is a ridiculous statement given her actions.....just end the marriage and the story.

Good potential here for a complex story about marriage and temptations. But unless I missed it, Sandy would not have any indication that her husband knew of John. So, why did she in effect confess so quickly? So, if I am right, you need to watch your logical plot and fact developments. Thanks for your good work overall and I look forward to the rest of this scenario.

for more chapters.

The husband has got some measure of payback. Even though he has taken her betrayal well(ish), I'd be looking to get my pound of flesh from the lover - he (and indeed she) didn't care a jot what impact their affair would have on their partners so why should he get away scott free.

now two cheaters , what a bunch of crap, you call this a marriage.. this author has no idea of a story line

Recall, our hero sent some texts before going into the conference room with Tracy. While there someone was outside viewing a video on a cell phone. My guess is our Hero sent his wife the videos he took previously of his wife and John having their illicit rendezvous and that was her viewing the video and leaning husband knew of her affair.

But, now that hubby has got some on the side too, the cat is out of the bag with the wife ... Just don't backslide into cuck bullshit ..., please? Like to see you address the smack talk wifey had on the phone with her boytoy, why did the video her husband doin the deed etc.

Divorce Sandy for her cheating behind your back and get on with your life. Sandy doesn't love you she's just a cheating cunt trying to get you to suck her lovwers cock and make you a gay , wimp cuckold

At some point, feelings will be hurt as they inevitably compare themselves to their paramours: "are her tits bigger than mine?" "Does she imagine John while we're fucking?" "Does he like being with Tracy?"

In the end, their marriage will crumble under the weight of doubt and fear.

I can vote now.

1*

Post cuckold stories in FETISH.

We still don't know any of the players (now four) very well, but Hubby has at least made a move. It might be the best move available to save his marriage, if that what he wants.

Not sure how Sweetie would have had time to see the video and spot Hubby hauling Vixen in for a little 'screw the secretary on the desk' action. (Yeah, she's more like a colleague!) Also not sure why a local businessman (Bull) would NOT be at Casino Night, networking while visibly supporting charity AND getting seconds on the day with Sweetie (in the adjoining conference room?)

You have me interested in these two, how they got to this place. Thx for commenter insight into how Sandy may have discovered her husband, via the text message.

How did she get started, why? Just for the fun? How do they move forward from here?

You can write well. The ability to draw the reader into the story.You get us to live

with and share the experience of the characters. A great gift.

Practice will improve your stories. I didn't enjoy this chapter division, in this story.

It would have greater impact as a whole. Anyway this story is played out.

Fenris17 I am looking forward to the next story.

AMerryMan

all chapters are 5 star, they have the erotic theme. However, you portray the husband having sexual fantasies with his wife with another man, clearly he does not share those desires. What man would allow cheating. Instead of contronting from the first chapter, filiming the proof in the second? Is his actions the start? I do not see this marriage continuing, I see their quiet drive home being their last. The wife clearly thought she had two worlds, and now after what see experienced in Casino night with her husband, she has lost her real world. This is what happends in cheating. Time to move on. Lets see what Chapter 4 holds. No cockolds or wimps, I am not into that type of characters.

I agree with others:

1. If you are going to use chapters, make them longer.

2. Add more to this story. You've set up several different scenarios. Conflict with John, wife breaks up with bf but gets another, Tracy tries to come between them. etc.

ps - hilarious that cuck-haters make the effort to click on these cuck stories. A bit like someone with peanut allergy deliberately buying peanuts just so they can complain about it.

If they are not happy together, why not go separate ways?

Because it's a fictional sex story on a fuck site, not real life. You fucking idiot.

I was waiting for this story to become interesting have some drama but it did nothing. I gave all three chapters a rating of " 1 " better luck next time.

Not a true CUCK story (which in glad about) as the husband is having his time with Tracy! Fenris also implied that the husband thought Sandy would stop seeing John after having their night together! So for me, right now it's more of an open marriage! *****

Two wrongs never did one right...When a man doesn't have self-respect, then he is lost in life...This husband was one of those men. The wife was just another cheater with no morals.

The sad and pathetic life of a couple with little respect and love.

Finish the story already!!

Why? So far not much of a story. Willing cuckolds don't make much for erotic stories.

The slut isn't going to give up fucking, neither is he. Why not have an open marriage.1*

Your all fucked up in the head! You really enjoy this shite, no wonder the whole world is fucked up!

What a couple of losers.

about a throw away marriage. Actually no marriage here to throw away. Whatever was in the wrapper is gone, so why sit looking sadly at an empty package? Time for these two losers to cut their losses and look for another person who they can actually commit to. Just another marriage that never should have happened, and essentially, never was.

Why stay married?. She doesn't love or respect.him. He is aware of this. Cut her loose, let her fuck anyone she want, and you won't be paying her way. Sandy is in for a big fall, let her burn.

Please put some balls on some of these husbands.

That little wimp needs to grow some balls and divorce his slutty wife. Who knows how long but if he were any kind of man, her would get some revenge on his wife and her lover... I really hate stories like this where the cuck doesn't do anything but watch his manhood goes down the drain... Just a sorry waste of time.

Sad little man

I highly recommend you read this story if you need to throw up

I'd like permission of the author to rewrite this with a much different outcome

Cuck shit, drivel really. In the wrong category, should be in fetish

Scores 1/5

Sad.

Ok it needed more! 2* finish the story, anyone?

damn it man

Wretched cuckold shit.

So, why no Part 4? I hate lazy authors who can’t seem to end their stories. They think they are being clever, or evocative, letting their tale go unfinished, or maybe they think ‘I’ll leave it to the reader to imagine what happens next’. Well, I got news for you: if I wanted to just leave it to my imagination I wouldn’t be reading these stories! FINISH THE DAMN STORY.

It's now an open marriage

I'm glad the series is over

so painful to read it

nope, I didn't need to read much

I skipped a lot

I hate cheating wife and a cuck

Second Bite of This Apple

Mid 40s, no children mentioned. No relatives, either! Married for awhile. One comment (post discovery) by Sweetie that she loved Hubby … meager! Hubby’s main thoughts about Sweetie were about her (apparent) was her lack of sensual interest! No sense he would take a splinter for her, let alone a bullet!

In other words … Why should We-The-Readers give a rat turd how any of their near or far future lives develop?

I have Noticed that almost all the writer's here Can not finish the dam story they start So what is it with the Authors here? This story sucked big time Me and some friends of mine from High School was out having a few cold one's when I spotted a Car a yellow Mustang in of all Places a Cotton field on a dirt road threw the cotton Patch It was Our class presidents Car! So I said stop the car we have something we need to checkout. I pointed out the car we all knew who it was We got out quietly went through the field two rows over from the dirt Road and then step over to the road next to the car and we could not believe what we saw! Our Class President was in the back seat and one of the schools English teacher was on her back both legs in the air and Both were in their skin only and John was Plowing the Field for all He was worth. lol did we say anything or let them know we were there? Hell no we had that Teacher for English class and we were going to milk it for everything we could. We were just getting into Poetry Hiku and Sequins Here was some of our Poetry (Teacher/ Two as one/ Lover of Students in the Cotton/ together) (Teacher of Love/ student as couple/ sweet) and the Poetry went on like this. hey we were in High School we did not care if the Poetry was correct it got our Meaning to Her! Of the 4 of us we all got A's in her class for that year and we never told anyone how! lol By the way our class President only got a B in her Class I wonder why? You see Author a beginning a Middle and a End of the story and by the way we did see Him and Her there and I do not think the Class Pres was teaching Bunny Baby Much. That was our Nick name for that Teacher.