All Comments on 'Sarah's Fantasy is Fulfilled'

What a wonderful, hot hot hot 3some. Different levels of caring throughout. A very well done story. I look forward to more.

I really liked this. A threesome could just be a porn cliché in the wrong hands, but the author keeps the interpersonal dynamics to the fore which makes the sex all the more sexy. Well written too, with a convincing and sympathetic narrator's voice and a sure hand in the close-up sexual descriptions. This certainly held my attention!

Hi. Thanks for giving me feedback. This is the first story of yours I picked to read.

I loved it. Its got great pace and moves smoothly from setting the scene through the preamble and then onto the action. I think you should consider putting a lot more dialogue into your stories rather than just describing everything. That said, I was left wondering if this was a true story or not - its very authentic. I really enjoyed reading it. Well done.