All Comments on 'Serving The Council'

You have me intrigued "catman"...

KEEP IT COMING ! I am hungry for MORE !

Grrrrrrrooowwwllllll !! GREAT Start !

got any more ya big tease? ;)

Looking forward to Chapter Two and finding out what the "assignment" was.

Thank you for commenting on my story "The Path". I will bew checking the spelling and making corrections.

I really like your story. It makes me what to know more. I hope you write more soon.

captivating story. Makes me want to know more about who this were is and what does he turn into? Look forward to reading the rest.

I liked this a lot. It is a good start to the other chapters that I see you have written.

You do need to pay attention to spelling and grammar. You are using 'there' instead of 'their' and some other errors as well. Some of your sentences had missing words - as if you were thinking faster than you typed...

Quote: "To explain, I do not remember much if any of the night my friends and I where attacked and what I do think are memories are rather haphazard and make little to no logical sense, but then again in what I have become that is a rather humorous thing. What I am now is the enforcing force for the council of others ,a group of elementals ( witches in common speak) vampires and were's( shape shifters of various types)"

Let's look at that, shall we? Okay....punctuation. You use a comma, then go on to write quite a lengthy, hard to read sentence. Keep it simple, stupid.

Oh, it's WERE....Not WHERE!

Now: The enforcing force. Hmmmmm, it reminds me of a double negative. There is nothing positive about this......

See what I mean, mr Writer-type person?

No? Think I'm being a mean, picky bastard? Well, wait until I read it, and pick it all to pieces!!

where has my little doggy gone, he is not in the window no more. TK U MLJ LV NV