by sxyoceanlady
Who doesn't like to see some nice ass chicks now and then?
At least the husband wasn't cucked in this story yet, I hope that continues swinging and an open marriage is one thing where the couple fucks together cucking is something else and hopefully won't happen in future stories although I don't hold out much hope.
a halfway decent story until you had a black guy with a ten inch dick. You get only one point because of that.
First person voice didn't work well here. 'I did this, then I...' A little of that goes a long way. Often you don't need to repeat the I, it can be assumed. Mix in some Use some dialog to carry the action.
Basically a nice hot story. However, the grammar and spelling and dramatic misuse of homophones and near homophones (since, sense) made the reading much slower than normal.
It is how you get your rocks off. For a cold hard dose of truth the guy is a doped up queer with full blown aids and enjoys shareing his treasure with as many stupid white whores/pigs he can infect . He ha plenty of staying power since the nerves are dead just like he will be in a year or so . Write your Niger digger stories with a worming called interracial and us racists can ignor them