All Comments on 'She Who Laughs Last'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
its a good start

BUT its is only a start, people like this jacob shouldnt bother your conscience when they FINALLY get what they deserve. problem that generally comes up is they die far to quickly before the payback is completed

rothltdoadrothltdoadover 13 years ago
what a sweet story lol

Nice to see a good revenge story now and again. I do dislike the kick em to the curb revenge though unless it really makes some sense. The idiots that leave those comments have not a clue about life or love or passion.

buttman52buttman52about 12 years ago
WOW

Great story and I love the ending.Please keep on writing and I will keep on reading,

Thank you

chytownchytownover 11 years ago
Good Read***

That's payback!! Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
She needs

Something big up her ass maybe Gordon has a big son.

BfreetorunBfreetorunover 10 years ago
Served this sorry bastard right.

I hope he lives a long time and suffers greatly.

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
NOT ONLY DOES THE LAST LAUGHER LAST BEST

usually they win and bear it back. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

A bit on the dumb side - a rape kit and a fresh load of semen will do what six witnesses can't.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
5stars

It was a really good plot.

Jhbrown27Jhbrown27over 4 years ago
okay story

guess their is some karma justice in the world.

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