All Comments on 'Simple Tricks Ch. 03'

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fastandsloppyfastandsloppyover 14 years ago
Too short

Spreading a sex scene across two chapters is cheating. I wanna read about her imminent ass fucking.

Other than that, if I had one complaint about this story it is that you haven’t described the demon particularly. I know what Paige looks like from looking up the show, but I would like a visual on the demon.

I guess I will be visiting your web-site to read the rest of the story in the near future.

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