by Greenly
I love this story and i cant wait to read more! Please don't leave us waiting much longer!
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a very good tale but it looks like you have given up on it.thats a shame to lead us on and then stop like others on this site.I wonder if life has stalled you or you or you just dont care about writing anymore.I just wish I had your tallent I sure wouldent wast it. ron from the U.S.A.
Seems that you are not going to finish this story. My hopes for the next chapter are going, going almost gone. It's a pitty, I really enjoyed this story.
I am so glad I went straight to the comments section of last chapter posted before I decided to read your story! It saved me from starting to read yet another story on lit that has been left unfinished,so will wait until the final chapter is posted if it is ever posted to read your story, I have been sucked in to often and become addicted to a story only to have it remain unfinished!!!!
Please please please finish this amazing story I can see so many places it could go So don't stop please
Such a shame to leave your readers and a great story unfinished,,,Makes me not want to read others postings until they are all finished....really sad,and a waste of a good story line..As many unfinished stories as there are on here,should have to have a complete story to post..or just start at the end,to make sure there is an ending.
Why go through the trouble of debunking plagiarism and directing people to another site where your story is posted, but you still haven't updated the story in all this time? What a waste of your effort and readers' time. Yet ANOTHER Lit story left unfinished. Too many of these on this site when there is a dearth of decent story lines and writers as it is. Disappointing...
I really love this story. Definitely one of the good ones.
I really hope it won't join the dozens of werewolf stories on this website that have been left unfinished! That would be really a pity.
Your story seemed to be just reaching its stride. It would seem a shame to just leave it here and not continue it. It holds such promise!!!
Loving this story. I sure hope you continue writing and continue this saga. I am sure there is more ahead for the couple.
WRIGHT MORE OF THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Just a note I'm sure everyone has given you, please write more- it's a really cool story and I look forward to whatever you do next.
The story is coming along well and it would be terrible if you left it unfinished.
Please finish the story.
5stars the whole book so far I'll keep a eye out for the next chapter
i love this one. one of my top 5 in it's category, "wolf and human mate". when are you going to post the continuation??
I really do enjoy your writing. I have 1 problem. You were going nice and slow and the pace was perfect, details and the questioning of feelings was great.... then you went from a steady highway 65 mph to Indy 500 in the matter of a chapter. If, when, you re-write this this chapter is too fast. Not the attack, nor him running to check on her, the late night dinner and conversation talking, questions... all of that is perfect. Going from the questions to "I love you mate" WAY TOO QUICK... maybe after the bbq, after she meets the pack and starts to see what she's getting into. Let them be the couple, and let her get into his life. He's been in hers, he knows her history. Allow her to learn his and have an experience where he's in danger or a member of the pack is in danger. Allow her to question her feelings more on if it's love or couple-dom or what. Or ignore everything I just said and come up with your own thing... but put something in between her finding out about him and his world and her love. Please. Plus, she's still strong. Good she's not so strong that she doesn't get scared for a damn good reason, I like that she did. I like that she turned to him, although I would have thought she would have turned to Henry first, but that's me. Telling X later. But hey, I just do ideas. All I am asking is that you don't rush to love, it's not natural and granted this is fiction... there should still be a natural progression.
I just love werewolf stories, and this is one of the best. One thing about finding a story late, is that I don't have to wait for chapters to be posted. I can read chapter 6 in my own time, and that is what I'm going to do right now. :)