All Comments on 'Stealing My Heart Ch. 05'

I just love werewolf stories, and this is one of the best. One thing about finding a story late, is that I don't have to wait for chapters to be posted. I can read chapter 6 in my own time, and that is what I'm going to do right now. :)

I really do enjoy your writing. I have 1 problem. You were going nice and slow and the pace was perfect, details and the questioning of feelings was great.... then you went from a steady highway 65 mph to Indy 500 in the matter of a chapter. If, when, you re-write this this chapter is too fast. Not the attack, nor him running to check on her, the late night dinner and conversation talking, questions... all of that is perfect. Going from the questions to "I love you mate" WAY TOO QUICK... maybe after the bbq, after she meets the pack and starts to see what she's getting into. Let them be the couple, and let her get into his life. He's been in hers, he knows her history. Allow her to learn his and have an experience where he's in danger or a member of the pack is in danger. Allow her to question her feelings more on if it's love or couple-dom or what. Or ignore everything I just said and come up with your own thing... but put something in between her finding out about him and his world and her love. Please. Plus, she's still strong. Good she's not so strong that she doesn't get scared for a damn good reason, I like that she did. I like that she turned to him, although I would have thought she would have turned to Henry first, but that's me. Telling X later. But hey, I just do ideas. All I am asking is that you don't rush to love, it's not natural and granted this is fiction... there should still be a natural progression.

Love This story please update Would love more

i love this one. one of my top 5 in it's category, "wolf and human mate". when are you going to post the continuation??

5stars the whole book so far I'll keep a eye out for the next chapter

The story is coming along well and it would be terrible if you left it unfinished.

Please finish the story.

Just a note I'm sure everyone has given you, please write more- it's a really cool story and I look forward to whatever you do next.

I know u have more up your sleeve, please write more..

Hope you finish it

Please continue the story!!!

WRIGHT MORE OF THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Loved the story hope you continue this

Loving this story. I sure hope you continue writing and continue this saga. I am sure there is more ahead for the couple.

Your story seemed to be just reaching its stride. It would seem a shame to just leave it here and not continue it. It holds such promise!!!

I really love this story. Definitely one of the good ones.

I really hope it won't join the dozens of werewolf stories on this website that have been left unfinished! That would be really a pity.

Why go through the trouble of debunking plagiarism and directing people to another site where your story is posted, but you still haven't updated the story in all this time? What a waste of your effort and readers' time. Yet ANOTHER Lit story left unfinished. Too many of these on this site when there is a dearth of decent story lines and writers as it is. Disappointing...

Please please please finish the story

Where the rest noooooo don't leave me hanging

Such a shame to leave your readers and a great story unfinished,,,Makes me not want to read others postings until they are all finished....really sad,and a waste of a good story line..As many unfinished stories as there are on here,should have to have a complete story to post..or just start at the end,to make sure there is an ending.

Please please please finish this amazing story I can see so many places it could go So don't stop please

I am so glad I went straight to the comments section of last chapter posted before I decided to read your story! It saved me from starting to read yet another story on lit that has been left unfinished,so will wait until the final chapter is posted if it is ever posted to read your story, I have been sucked in to often and become addicted to a story only to have it remain unfinished!!!!

It been affitially a year now.

Seems that you are not going to finish this story. My hopes for the next chapter are going, going almost gone. It's a pitty, I really enjoyed this story.

a very good tale but it looks like you have given up on it.thats a shame to lead us on and then stop like others on this site.I wonder if life has stalled you or you or you just dont care about writing anymore.I just wish I had your tallent I sure wouldent wast it. ron from the U.S.A.

Still having computer problems? Whoever is fixing your computer must be fired, seems they aren't doing a great job.

When is the next chapter coming out???

I love this story and i cant wait to read more! Please don't leave us waiting much longer!

And still waiting. Are you still having computer problems?

Great writing,waiting for the next chapter on pins and needles,please finish the story,dont leave us hanging like so many others!!!!

Your story is great!!! Please post more!!

I am ecstatic that she is a strong intelligent Black woman. It lifts my heart and soul to read this. Please update soon.

Are you still waiting for a computer? We are still waiting for the next chapter. Please bring it out soon.

unfinished story, meanwhile I first look at the comments at the end to see, if a story is concluded. Shame on you, to leave a good story hanging.

Please finish please please please please finish.

finish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its a great story so far

If I die before reading the finishing of this story,then my unsatisfied Soul will come to get you...

I love the story, but seriously over 9 months without connection can't you borrow a computer by any chance?

Waiting anxiously

please wrie more this was a beaytiful story, i need more

Please write the next chapter.

Fast!

When does Terrance and Simon get their punishment and how does the pack take Jordan... oh and when does Delia get what is coming to her.... :-) Can't wait for next chapter... please finish. I hate when great stories don't get an ending.

More pretty please : (

and still counting till next chapter.

great story, wonderful character development so far. I love that you've managed to avoid so many cliches with Jordan--she's very unique. I strongly hope you come back and finish this so all your followers can finally release our collectively held breath.

Why torture me so? The story is far from over, please finish it.

please finish the story.......theres so much more left...and you're such a great writer..... :-)

please more soon.. this is a great story....

Really enjoyed the story :)

Please! Please! Please!

Write more :)

Your story has provided that reprieve from real life that I so often seek, but don't always find in the escape provided in a book.

The story is interesting and attention holding. It allows my mind to wander from my troubles and lets my heart believe. When it seems there is only bad everywhere I look... sometimes good is right next to it.

Please continue... And I will read and reread when I need to rediscover Hope.

You NEED to finish! ^-^

You soooooo have to finish this.

I wish people who post novella's would post the complete story all at once.

tr1c@hotmail.co.uk

Next chapter please

keep up the good work I hope you finish this and write many more.

Please post as soon as possible :(

I can't wait until you post more... Loving this story!!

Just curious as to when the next chapter is coming? please bring out the next chapter soon.

I love a good story and this is one of them. Please write more.

I was starting to get a bit irritated by how long it was taking me to find a good story and then I stumbled upon this one and I must say it was worth the time spent looking for it.

Other then a few spelling/grammer errors here and there I love the story so far and look forward to future chapters so keep it up!

Where is the next chapter? Please make us wait.

That cannot be the end....Pls continue

Please please write more

This is an excellent story. It is hard to believe this series was your first attempt. Please don't leave us hanging.

Please tell me that was not the end! Where is the next chapter? Hurry!

You, me, and everyone else on this site. (Or that authors would at least let people know that they've stopped writing.)

i wish ppl would complete their stories??

So i guess your not going to finish huh? ... I've been waiting for months!! ... what a shame it was such a good story!

I usually don't leave comments but I've been looking for a good story for weeks and this is excellent. I really hope you continue it.

Great story, hope you can find time to finish it soon.

You're doing such a great job with this story...I hope you plan to finish it.

Holy hell I love this series now. Don't you dare leave us hanging.

Awe... Come on.. Love it... Please finish.... Absolutely love it. Great story and expression of passion.

ANOTHER STORY HANGING AND THE WIND...FINISH THIS STORY PLEASE

YOU'RE KILLING ME

...actually I'm not asking nicely.

I *demand* that you put your life on hold and finish this amazing story with its lovely characters!

OBEY!!!! ;-)

I love your story so far I've read it over and over but I need more so please write more it's a fantastic start your blesed to have such writing skills so please don't let them go to waist and don't let your fans down by not finishing the story I can't wait to here from you good luck xx

Love it, love it, love it!!!

Your story is truly touching and captivating! Can't wait

For More ! Please and thank you!

This is like my favorite story on here cuz it's so passionate and loving. Hurry up(;

It's like a book I don't want to put down. Hurry please.

I heart this so much!!!! please continue

I have really enjoyed reading this and would hate for it to end here.

This is an amazing story that should be continued! It's full of romanca and passion so you need to finish it!!!

I am hooked. It would be great to read the remainder of this story. Please finish.

I hope you continue this story SOON!

5 stars for content, though some editing needed.

LadyTiger

was a great story, now we need more to them and Terrance, Delia, Marco, and Simon meeting the fate that they had in store for them. Soon please???

This was so great! You should finish it. There is at least 10 more chapters in this story! Please, with a cherry on top, please finish this.

SOOO GOOD, you should finish.

This is an awesome story! Please continue I have to know more!!!!!!!

m0@r plz! ^_^

Seriously, superb plot and characters. I'm enjoying this story very much. You do, however, require an editor. ;)

My roommate must think I'm a lunatic because it's 4 in the morning

i am very intrigued by this story and cant wait for more : )

LOVE IT NEED MORE

i'm so happy right now!!!

this is EXACTLY the kind of brilliant Were story that i've been searching for!

I thought i was going to have to write it myself!

but you came through, and thanks for a fantastic story.

now we just need the rest!!

post it soon!

k_k

You're an awesome storyteller, please complete this fantastic story!

Please dont leave us hanging. I think this us a great story, I hope you finish it.

Please wright more I've read the story's over and over I am begging you to wright some more your storys are fantastic so please keep wrighting xxx

Hello:

I have read every wherewolf story on literotica I can find and yours is up there witgh the other great writers. It's a Wonderfull story that is well written. Please keep writing I look forward to reading the next chapter and hope this will be a novel.

A Friend

loving the hole story when will we hear about the bad mens plot

I love this story!!!!! Please update...I keep running across these wonderful stories that are not finished. I beg you!!!!!!!!! please finish it.