by Greenly
i am always so happy when you update, because your story is so good it makes me happy. i love the personalities you've given your characters even the bad guys. x and jordan are so good for each other, and i really like how you've brought them together the way that you have. awww, their story gives a warm feeling inside and puts a smile on my face. keep up the good work, and please, please, please don't abandon this story! and i hope you have a smooth transition in your new apartment :)
did that happen fast or what. Of course w/Jordan having the background she does it was probably easier for her to accept the whole shifter thing all at once rather than slowly as X might have wanted. Now that they have acknowledged their love for one another I have a feeling things are about to get hairier! Yes pun intended hehe-he
every chapter of this story leaves me craving the next. very enjoyable chapter and i can't wait until Xavier gets his claws into Marco then Terrance looking forward to the next chapter
X is onto marco now. what was that about marco's saliva...
Yesssssssss...the wolf is out of the bag.... finally!!!!
Alpha Terrance will be pissed to find out his man was more of a help
to Xay than a hinderance. Ha Ha!!! So happy for him...soooooo.
I get the vibe that Jordan has some wolf in her...just a vibe. She is way too
comfortable with the news of Were culture. Was she an abandoned cub?
The unfolding will be very, very interesting.
Anon, what other site is it on? That's terrible. I sure hope this isn't really the case. Heartbreaking, as I was totally loving it.
Plagiarism does suck! However I am posting this on another site. When I first started I had named the main character Sam but before I posted here I changed the name! I'm happy to know that my story is being read elsewhere. It's on Wattpad under the name Tiger5. I hope no one is to upset!
I am very proud of my work and I hate that someone would call me out on Plagiarism without sending me an email so I could clear myself first. I hope you are satisfied with your assumptions Anon but next time keep them to yourself!
Just so there is no more confusion or accusations of plagarism I am changing my Wattpad account name to Greenly5. Please follow me there if you want quicker uploads! Thanks for all your comments and support.
I asked the question if you were dual posting or not. I did the same to whitesabretooth who had 5 stories lifted. I would think you would appreciate someone asking the question. I have also posted on the other site.
If you were being plagarized like some other writers on lit you should appreciate being asked about it out in the open. I am sure I am not the only one to see the multiple uploads of this story. When I have seen other writers work lifted (plagarized), it bothers me. They did the work and deserve the credit.
I have no problem with the it being noted that a possible plaragism has occured. I would definately want to know if my story was being plagarized. My problem was with the commenter's assumption that I was the one doing it without getting all the facts straight first.
You know you posted the same story which was time delayed, yu changed the lead character's name and you changed the story's name. All of which are red flags for plagarized material. Yet you are mad cause someone acturally asked about it when this is the site that was the later posting. If you had plagarized you would have known where it came from, and when it was posted and could of lied about it all. I noted the name change on the site you mentioned so I give you that. But your actions created doubt not mine. Like I said if you were plagarized you would appreciate being asked even publicly.
@SeekerCD
Your intention was good but you didn't handle it well. You could have informed the original author in wattpad about her story being copied so she would be the one contacting the author here. Or you could have clicked the 'Report Story' button and leave it to the webmasters.
Unnecessary comments/accusations wouldn't have been made. This would have been dealt with peacefully since there is no plagiarism that happened.
@miss author
I suggest you do use one username ^^ And put it somewhere in the story that you are posting stories on other sites ^^
I did not accuse. I originally asked if she posted somewhere else. Given the character's name change, the lit posting was the later posting, and the story name change makes one suspicious. Had she not changed the name or the story name, then I would assume that there was different listing but one the same author. Why change the names unless she has a reason -- the name change makes suspecious. JazCullen has posted on another site teasers to her stories. I know that they are hers - she has created a signature sort of speak. Greenly could learn that.
@SeekerCD
I read your previous comment and I didn't see any question there. I suggest you go back and read it since I can't see any question mark. Besides, with the way you stated it, you were implying that this one is the copy and the other one is the original since the latter is posted three days earlier. But it is not my point.
My point is that, when I see a copied or plagiarized fic, I don't go commenting on that fic. Instead, I inform the original author about the plagiarism so that she would be the one contacting the other author. Or like I said, I'll just press that 'report story' button and let the webmasters handle it. Surely, they would know at once that it is the same author. And you would too. If you did email or message the author in the other site, you would know that she is greenly. We should not create confusion to other readers by leaving comments like that, especially, if no plagiarism occurred.
@miss author
She does have a point. Leave something in your stories that would indicate that you are the original writer so that instances like this would be avoided.
while she may be shifter, i think she is not wolf, her abilities seem more feline, which would be very interesting, as to where she comes from and how she does know what she is and i went to wattpad, noticed the rating, are you posting on both, one for the mass;s and one that is more, well Adult?
OK what i miss, did Jordan shift?.. i had to re-read chapter again and i didnt read she shifted to wolf or feline.. Confused.. Any who dont stop posting Greenly ima lovin this story and so what you posted on another site and im glad its you posting it and not some thief so lets all more on ppl :)
Enjoying the story and the little ways you spice up the story, I.E. the fact that X cant go in the kitchen--love that LOL.
I can't believe that Xavier didn't respond more strongly to Marco's attack on Jordan. Did she tell him that Marco and friends are watching her?
I would expect an alpha male to remove her from the motel and into his protective custody while calling in his betas to scout the area around the motel to locate, and attempt to capture these guys. He would also insist on thoroughly examining her wounds personally! And then plenty of kissing to make it better!
I discovered this series today and I am really glad I took the time to read it. Wonderful story and I can't wait to read how the relationship develops.
Well done!
Amazing story, great writing! Keep up the good work and watch out for the grammar nazis! They are all over the place!
I have read all 5 chapters three times....I cant wait to read chapter 6. Please hurry.
I love this story!!!!! Please update...I keep running across these wonderful stories that are not finished. I beg you!!!!!!!!! please finish it.
Hello:
I have read every wherewolf story on literotica I can find and yours is up there witgh the other great writers. It's a Wonderfull story that is well written. Please keep writing I look forward to reading the next chapter and hope this will be a novel.
A Friend
Please wright more I've read the story's over and over I am begging you to wright some more your storys are fantastic so please keep wrighting xxx
Please dont leave us hanging. I think this us a great story, I hope you finish it.
You're an awesome storyteller, please complete this fantastic story!
i'm so happy right now!!!
this is EXACTLY the kind of brilliant Were story that i've been searching for!
I thought i was going to have to write it myself!
but you came through, and thanks for a fantastic story.
now we just need the rest!!
post it soon!
k_k
i am very intrigued by this story and cant wait for more : )
My roommate must think I'm a lunatic because it's 4 in the morning
m0@r plz! ^_^
Seriously, superb plot and characters. I'm enjoying this story very much. You do, however, require an editor. ;)
This is an awesome story! Please continue I have to know more!!!!!!!
This was so great! You should finish it. There is at least 10 more chapters in this story! Please, with a cherry on top, please finish this.
was a great story, now we need more to them and Terrance, Delia, Marco, and Simon meeting the fate that they had in store for them. Soon please???
I hope you continue this story SOON!
5 stars for content, though some editing needed.
LadyTiger
I am hooked. It would be great to read the remainder of this story. Please finish.
This is an amazing story that should be continued! It's full of romanca and passion so you need to finish it!!!
I have really enjoyed reading this and would hate for it to end here.
This is like my favorite story on here cuz it's so passionate and loving. Hurry up(;
Your story is truly touching and captivating! Can't wait
For More ! Please and thank you!
I love your story so far I've read it over and over but I need more so please write more it's a fantastic start your blesed to have such writing skills so please don't let them go to waist and don't let your fans down by not finishing the story I can't wait to here from you good luck xx
...actually I'm not asking nicely.
I *demand* that you put your life on hold and finish this amazing story with its lovely characters!
OBEY!!!! ;-)
Awe... Come on.. Love it... Please finish.... Absolutely love it. Great story and expression of passion.
You're doing such a great job with this story...I hope you plan to finish it.
I usually don't leave comments but I've been looking for a good story for weeks and this is excellent. I really hope you continue it.
So i guess your not going to finish huh? ... I've been waiting for months!! ... what a shame it was such a good story!
You, me, and everyone else on this site. (Or that authors would at least let people know that they've stopped writing.)
Please tell me that was not the end! Where is the next chapter? Hurry!
This is an excellent story. It is hard to believe this series was your first attempt. Please don't leave us hanging.
I was starting to get a bit irritated by how long it was taking me to find a good story and then I stumbled upon this one and I must say it was worth the time spent looking for it.
Other then a few spelling/grammer errors here and there I love the story so far and look forward to future chapters so keep it up!
Just curious as to when the next chapter is coming? please bring out the next chapter soon.
keep up the good work I hope you finish this and write many more.
I wish people who post novella's would post the complete story all at once.
tr1c@hotmail.co.uk
Your story has provided that reprieve from real life that I so often seek, but don't always find in the escape provided in a book.
The story is interesting and attention holding. It allows my mind to wander from my troubles and lets my heart believe. When it seems there is only bad everywhere I look... sometimes good is right next to it.
Please continue... And I will read and reread when I need to rediscover Hope.
Really enjoyed the story :)
Please! Please! Please!
Write more :)
please finish the story.......theres so much more left...and you're such a great writer..... :-)
great story, wonderful character development so far. I love that you've managed to avoid so many cliches with Jordan--she's very unique. I strongly hope you come back and finish this so all your followers can finally release our collectively held breath.
When does Terrance and Simon get their punishment and how does the pack take Jordan... oh and when does Delia get what is coming to her.... :-) Can't wait for next chapter... please finish. I hate when great stories don't get an ending.
I love the story, but seriously over 9 months without connection can't you borrow a computer by any chance?
If I die before reading the finishing of this story,then my unsatisfied Soul will come to get you...
finish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its a great story so far
Please finish please please please please finish.
unfinished story, meanwhile I first look at the comments at the end to see, if a story is concluded. Shame on you, to leave a good story hanging.
Are you still waiting for a computer? We are still waiting for the next chapter. Please bring it out soon.
I am ecstatic that she is a strong intelligent Black woman. It lifts my heart and soul to read this. Please update soon.
Great writing,waiting for the next chapter on pins and needles,please finish the story,dont leave us hanging like so many others!!!!