All Comments on 'Stranger'

Please take the time to punctuate your sentences. The run-on sentences were very distracting. It was difficult to follow the story because of the poor grammar.

I liked the basic idea of your story.

Take time writting stories. Nobody is in hurry. Expand the story nicely. We dont know what is in your mind. Short paragraphs and long well expanded story is fun reading.

Best wishes for next story. Theme was nice.

this was stupid.