All Comments on 'Taken Home For The Night'

I couldn't get past the first couple lines full of errors and missing words.

I normally don't do negative comments but this one had so many glaring issues right from the start it was jarring. I stopped reading after the first minute.

...well, you'd probably think it was one word.

Un-fucking-readable!

(And just to void any confusion, the above is NOT a compliment)