All Comments on 'Test Drive'

What a load of shit you write like a five year old child

This story was short but sweet. The troll who said you write like a 5 year old should short out his punctuation as he can't even get it right in one line. LOL!

i want to read about him owning her pussy next!

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But you need. To learn where. To put periods. And commas. As well as keep past and present tense straight. It makes for better writing.

If you just wanna "get to the fuckin' " and don't really care about the art of the written word, then don't worry about it. If you want to actually be a better writer, you have some things to work on.

the haha's were totally annoying.

Wonderful mid aged lady sucking young black cock. They should fuck next time. I am a horny old man from India.

i think i will go to another town and look around and give that idea a try, i have gone to a wal -mart in other towns and had good luck a few times that i tried it, luv that black cock

This was a pitiful attempt at relating what I would believe to be an actual encounter.

All white women want to try a black cock because all women are curious. If they say differently they are liars. I gave it one star and that was for effort.