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All Comments on 'The Adjustment Facility Ch. 02'

by FurLove

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Nicely done

But there is one slight mistake, near the bottom of page 2 where you said, "He watches reruns of TNG dreaming of making it with 7 of 9", I should correct you, 7 of 9 isn't in "TNG", she's in "Voyager".

Petty I know, but getting facts straight leads to it being more believable

NamizujsNamizujsover 18 years ago
Whichever the scene..

These stories are hot!

THX

John

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