All Comments on 'The Barn Ch. 05'

wow,great build up ,keeps me drooling for more. keep up the good stuff mate.cant wait for further chapters.

Even though only a fool would trust a demon, this one does seem to be getting genuinely friendly with his hosts. Can't wait to see how things develop! Will they take sympathy with his situation when it finally comes out and try to help, or will they leave him in their barn to rot? Or will he use him occult powers to make the question moot? Even before manifesting, he was skilled at toying with his unwitting hosts' minds...