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All Comments on 'The Birthday Wish'

by wet_princess69

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Lost interest

I found this to drawn out and boring. Just my opinion

Scorpio44Scorpio44over 14 years ago
Such possibilities...

It could have been a contender! A bit more character development, a little more emotional content from the ladies and something about why they would give him such a present could have made this an impressive story. Could have.

DefluerDefluerabout 14 years ago
Liked it.

Pretty good, but kind of skimpy on the ending.

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