All Comments on 'The Blob Ch. 02'

Get an editor, learn to spell, & continuing writing

That was crap. Don't bother writing if you can't spell, use punctuaton or tell a decent story. Boo!

Having someone else to edit your story goes a long way. If your do not have someone to proof read... then take your time and review it over and over. Sometime reading aloud helps. If it don't sound right to you when read aloud, then it will not to ANYONE else.

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