All Comments on 'The Carpet Cleaner'

It started out ok but as like your other story 'The Barmaid' was a let down from the middle towards the end.

It seems this one you can't end soon fast enough. It was abrupt. And also a lots of wrong usage of words and category of course.

Romance is a love relationship which involves two parties Sadly to say there is none of this strong emotion in both your story. Yours is just a raunchy fuck story. The appropriate category would be in the erotic coupling.

Please make use of an editor for your future work and better luck next time.

That was awesome... I absolutely loved it... I read this, and 'The Barmaid' and apart from wishing that there was more corsetry in The Barmaid (personal prefrence) I have nothing bad to say.