All Comments on 'The Decision'

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comicfairycomicfairyalmost 18 years ago
Nice ;]

Nice. I like his patience with her, and her indecision. Always nice to hear when someone is thinking things through before just jumping into the lifestyle.

One word of advice, though: you may want to trim down your paragraphs...the eyes tend to glaze over all your lengthy ones. lol

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