All Comments on 'The Dressing Table'

I really liked the story but the way you split up the sentences to emphasise certain parts took away from the flow somehow and I found myself losing interest towards the end.

Lots of planning just to get a guy, and we are just pushovers anyway!

Turns out this series is continued in another (LW) category, anyway. I hate that! Keep subsequent chapters in the same category as the first one!