by dirty_lover
She would be what most submissive men want. She would take them to bed to be her sex toy. I would have wanted this in my youth.
And a loving domme to boot. Right up my alley.
Please, please, please, continue this story. And write more stories of this sort.
Both parts 1 and 2 were amazing! The story is so fluid and the plot is actually believable. I'm actually drawn to these characters and the story. Can't wait to read what happens next. 5 stars out of 5!
Wow, this is a GREAT story! Awesome attention to details, both in the story itself and the actual narration, right down to the punctuation. Both in parts 1 and 2, you built up the sexual "tension" and excitement like a real professional. Thanks a bunch for the great story, and I'm EAGERLY awaiting the third chapter! Easily 5 stars. :)
And the dream of many a young man, I'd bet! A thrilling story with a little of everything, beautifully mixed; I wait, with bated breath as the saying goes, for the next chapter!
4*s - well done.