by darkmaas
i am impressed. i was drawn in from the start. i like the intruige. and my favorite part is there isnt any neat bow to tie up all the loose ends. it leaves me thinking-- and i for one am a girl that likes to think with her erotica.
I found myself reminded of Stephen King. I love Stephen King. The twists to the plot after every union were wonderful, please give us another!
For the want of a better word, I would call this piece conceptual... I will second the opinion the the person who talked about threads, but it wasn't disjointed, and strangly, I wouldn't have actually called it horror either. Very nearly, but you held it on that very calm knife edge, and did't let it fall over. Very, very good!
I quite enjoyed the dialog which seemed so natural in such an unnatural tale. It appears to me that this was written by a craftsman and so Bravo on a lovely piece.
Wonderful.
At times I thought I was reading E.A.Poe,
then P.B.Shelley, The Book of Common Prayer,
and finally part of the liturgy in the Catholic Mass.
Absolutely captivated me.
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