All Comments on 'The Happiest of Endings'

Get his wife involved.

Oh god I would love to feel Jade fill my ass with hot she cum as Julie throat fucked me until she fed me her creamy girl juice!!!! YUMMY!!! I came twice while reading your story, THANKS

so well written and so intense, you have given me a new personal fantasy, only i wish to be either Jade or Julie!

This is my ultimate fantasy as well. I have had massages by men, where my ass is teased, but nothing more. I have always taken that real life experience and built upon it. Your story touched that nerve and was fantastic. Try something more - a sequel perhaps?

Excellent work! Please keep writing

Please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AMAZING STORY!!! thank the gods for creating such a good author for this series. i hope that you keep writing stories as good as this

I thoroughly enjoyed this story which captured me into the

storyline very quickly and easily and then just continued to enhance and build the situation. It was well written and totally believable. I was really turned on and would love to see a sequel of some kind. Keep up the good work

loved it, but the theme is by the who, not yes

The CSI theme song was definitely by "The Who", not "Yes"

She asked "Who did the theme?"

He answered "Yes" - as in "yes they did" not as in the band called "Yes"

Im pretty sure the Who thing was a joke?? It made me laugh anyway! Read it again something like 'she asked me Who did the theme tune for it and she was confused when I said yes.' As in, he thought she asked if the Who did it. It's really not all that hard to understand... And a brilliant story, keep up the good work!

Some years ago I picked up a delicious street whore who turned out to be a transexual, and have loved trannies ever since, cannot get enough of these wonderful creatures. Please write more about them, specially as well as you did this story. Dino, who loves shemales of all colors, sizes, etc.

made my cock hard and my ass twitch as I thought of his surprise ;=)

I really laughed at "Hot wax for the shelf from the candle, Hot cum for me from Jade, he thought, that's almost poetic."

Great story. Would love to get taken like that.Have always wanted to find a women to fuck me in my ass. Living in a small town makes some of the great experiences with different sex experiences impossible to find.

only thing wrong, The Who do the theme for CSI, not YES =) great story.

Great stoy, and unlike the other comment, I did get the 'Who'/'Yes' joke...

This story was really a turn on for me. The idea behind the story is on my bucket list. My wife has fucked me with a dildo and fisted me. I would love to feel a hard cock cum in my ass while either sucking a cock or eating a hot wet pussy.

This story seems like a dream!Thank you and I hope you will write more like it! perhaps a continuation would be fun, especially with the same characters!

Incredible my brain raced

The wife should come along next time.

Oh my was that good! So hot!!!

Hot and sexy!

i loved your story, i hope you will write more about them.

i hope you will make jade more dominant, she sounds amazing even if its just a story :)

That was incredible! More, soon, please.

great story love to try this one

THAT was one of the hottest stories I've read in a while. Well done.

the hottest story I ever read

I loved this story! It's the kind that really gets me going! I hope that you will write more T-Girl stories! This is the type of story I used to search for, but could never find. Thank you for sharing it with us.

this is the stuff of dreams

Story had me hard from the beginning. Wish I could find a place like that! Bet it would feel great taking two cocks at once.

Where do I sign up to be David?

Very erotic story. Agree with another poster, get David's wife involved.

You have reason to be proud. So many quality followers of your erotic mind, and the fingers that translate into stimulating words for others to enjoy ... and stroke and Stroke too. Then there's "ruwild" who seeks works like this. For those who haven't found his works, I personally place ruwild on a similar plain with "bb1212". Oh so many quality authors, so many hot, good intentioned stories to keep the juices flowing. I love it here on LitErotica. I'm "with you" VWC10.

really fantastic

Such a sexi story, you should write many more in this vein x

The story was great - always enjoy a VG tranny story! Just a little correction - the theme songs for all the CSI shows were done by the WHO.

Duke

This is my previous comment trying to explain.

You are right

The CSI theme song was definitely by "The Who", not "Yes"

She asked "Who did the theme?"

He answered "Yes" - as in "yes they did" not as in the band called "Yes"

Thanks to everyone who has read, commented and/or voted on this story.

I am humbled by the incredible respose.

BB1212

by the WHO, or YES. one could type WHO OR YES or a new Abbot.Cosello monologue, and the answer us YES WHO or WHO is YES, is yes more than WHO or WHO is YES. I am still drunk from the Preakness, TK U MLJ LV NV

Next time david should slide some thigh high sheer nylons on his legs so he can feel the girl nylons slip up and down his legs and get the whole sensation

very very erotic ! I can easily imagine being Julie as I know a gurl just like her.

More please !!

I reaklly enjoyed the story, very hot...

Title nuff said story was fucking hot man

I read this one before and lost track of the link. The second time I found it, I loved the delivery !!!! even more and forwarded it to a friend. Third times the charm. I can't get enough of your writing ... And the theme.

I want to feel that hot cum from those to ladies fill me ass.

You have found another Band (Yes) to add to the Animiacs version of Who's on First:

Slappy Squirrel: ["The Who" is playing on Stage] Skippy, what's the name of the Band, playing on Stage?

Skippy Squirrel: Who.

Slappy Squirrel: The name of the Band.

Skippy Squirrel: Who.

Slappy Squirrel: The Band, playing on Stage.

Skippy Squirrel: WHO!

Slappy Squirrel: THE BAND!

Skippy Squirrel: No Aunt Slappy, "The Band" performs later, "WHO" is on Stage!

Slappy Squirrel: You tell me.

Skippy Squirrel: Who.

Slappy Squirrel: The name of the Band.

Skippy Squirrel: Who.

Slappy Squirrel: The Band playing on Stage.

Skippy Squirrel: Who.

Slappy Squirrel: THAT's WHAT I WANNA KNOW!

I would love to see a sequel involving the wife...maybe a few. If he is going to get "massaged" regularly, Allie might follow him and catch him in the act; or investigate on her own and get her own "massage"...leading to them running into each other...

I love the way you write.

It's kind of like when you go to the store for an item and come back with something completely different. David went in for tuna and decided to try the sausage instead. Good Story.

...Keep me up at night. Would love to meet someone like David, very erotic and hot story that was well written and designed. Thanks for sharing David, Jade, and Julie with us, and please keep writing, you're very good!

Nice to see two trannys working, and described so well that they both were a suprise.

Loved the story. Great stroking story and yes please keep on writing this story please

the best story you have ever written. MORE PLEASE!

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It's laughable.

Your combination of trannies and a massage scenario was over the top hot. Loved it. I was there with David the whole time.

wow that had me hot. like to visit one of those.

I loved this story and wanted to be there.

was hoping that Allie would experience the same surprise and get really sexed and used by a transsexual......

I Loved This Story; Well written and very erotic. I have been with a fair number of TS Ladies, and the majority of those exoeriences have been very good, a few were awesome, and a few were not so good. I find TS ladies very eritic, and had they had the support groups when I was young I may well have transitioned myself. My girlfriend/Mistress, loves to see me dressed in lingerie and pantyhose, simetimes we put make up on me sometimes not. We watch TS porn together and she encourages my femme side, saying I bet my little cum slut sissy bitch would love to have that nice juicy TS cock in her mouth right now, wouldn't you bitch. I say yes mistress and another in my boy puss in place of this vibrator too. That's my nasty little cum slut, you wanta cum for your Mistress, my nasty little sissy? Yes Misstress may I please cum for you. Well Okay, but you know the rules, you gotta eat it all up like the cum slut you are. Yes Mistress, may I have another taste of your sweet chocolate cum first My hot sexy Mistress. I thought you would never ask, here you go bitch lick my fingers clean, then cum for me and lick up every drop. YES Mistress my.pleasure.

I regularly get a massage and more from a gay masseur, but to have a really feminine TS do the same has got to be a wonderful experience. Wish they were in Florida!

A very horny story!

Thank you for posting and keep up the good work.

You don't want to hear this, I'm sure, but facts are not altered by irrational emotionally driven thought processes. I have no problem with any of the characters sexual preferences; indeed, I am bi myself, so it would be ridiculous to object to such a thing. What I have a problem with is you spitting on intersex individuals in the name of your own prejudice. What I mean is, unless you are born intersex, you have no right, or scientific justification, to claim to be a woman, or man, trapped in the opposite sex's body. None. You may be nutty as a pecan pie, but you aren't intersex. You are the sex your genetic code says you are. Saying otherwise is both nonsense, and an insult to actual people with intersex genetic characteristics. Whether that insult is common or not does not matter. Perpetuating it is wrong. My brother is intersex, with an extra x chromosome. He has suffered because of actual physical differences between him and "normal" (bullshit term) males. The "woman" in this story cannot say the same. His/her only justification for claiming to share my brothers pain is psychology. Meaning, he/she's not completely sane. To conflate her/his mental problems with my brother, and other people with intetsex characteristics, real, physically manifest causes for the suffering they endure is ignorant at best, and despicable at worst. Kindly cease this insulting pattern. Thank you. I anticipate your ignoring and deleting this comment. It will only cement in my mind the truth of your bigoted, self centered nature.

What a fun, sexy and erotic story! I didn't expect it to turn out the way it did but it was exciting to read and unfold the way it did. I would love to have been David and receive a massage like that...I love to be massaged and can only dream to be on the receiving end of a massage like that ;)

I had a weekend in Japan just this and will never forget it because one of the ladies married a buddy of mine and lives next door,my wife and I love them both, she is a ladyboy too.

I love this story , and have re-read it , probably 20 times . I think this one should be continued .

speaking of surprises, i found this story because it was noted as a favorite by another writer here. i see that it has been here for some time 4/07 and people have read it many times, probably more times than people have left comments. you should be very proud of this story the last comment in 2013, for a story to be read and commented on for 6 years is remarkable. it is sad that i was unable to find a continuation to this story. This story is well written, well executed, and to say the least very very hot. i have often fantasized about what is referred to as "Futanari" women, as in your story, i truly believe these are women that happen to have cocks. i do realize some of the movies that these women have made are fake, but my fantasy they are not and when they come in gallons, turns me on. it is now 2016 and your story still can turn on people, congratulations.

Very hot story!!! I would love to experience sex with two she males .I often fantasize about being taken by two she males.I want to experience having one in my mouth and one in my ass at the same time.I want to feel them cum deep in my ass and fill my mouth with cum.

Absolutely hot story, well written. 5*

As it appears him and his wife are swingers, how hot would have been to take them home for the next round??

Would have fave'd it if I was allowed as Anon.

JJ

This brought back happy memories of when I had 2 shemales, one in my ass and one in my mouth, I need to do that again real soon !!

All I can say is wow

Jesus! How hot that was. You made it seem so real.

Enough said.

R E A L

David got a FULL massage. How about round two, where Jade Cums down his throat to fill his tummy while Julie fills his ass,

Man how sexually awesome, a straight & beautiful fuck..

Fucking awesome. Stroking my cock with a prostate massager in me while reading the story. Barely made it to the end before ERUPTING with my orgasm. Thanks for the story

Maybe a sequel with his wife getting a massage to handle her stress? That would be perfect.

I have never been to a parlor before but if I were to go this would be the exact place I would go to. Great story

Happiest of endings indeed!! What a wonderfully well written and erotic story! I wouldn't mind that kind of experience myself! You have an absolutely amazing talent for story telling. Definitely adding you as a favorite author.

How beautifully sexy & sexually thrilling, I sure wish that I could've, should've & would've been there. (But for now just having these two ladies teasing my breasts as their teeth bite & tounges lick while they gently suck at my nipples with soft lips is all I ask for...

Wish I could have been there with you!

Bottoms up

spankmeagin

This one is an incredible piece of writing . I would absolutely love to read about next week . I would also love to know where to find this place. Thanks for an excellent story , that I have read , at least a dozen times . This actually deserves a sixth star.

Outstanding story, would have been nice to end with his answer about next week!! Other than that fantastic story. Now I have to keep looking for next week's adventure

Hot, so hot. I’m sat here with a rock hard cock dripping presumably.

This is definitely HOTTT!!! This PantieBoi barely made it halfway into this thread when Christine exploded into hur tight, lace thong...Mmmm!!! A fresh, dry string bikini panty got me to the end of Your erotic thread. A well written, nicely paced story. Thanks a bunch....... xoxoxo S.C.💃👠👙

I read this story a while ago and it was hot then. Just Friday I went for a much needed massage and the woman could have been Julie although to my knowledge she wasn't equipped the same. But the experience brought up this story so I searched it out again. Still damned hot. Would love it if my new masseuse had a cock too. (She's an excellent masseuse regardless but it would be hot) Got me fantasizing about my next appointment.

OMG what a hot story. I think everyone would like to find this massage parlor. I know I would love to. Actually I would love to be one of the workers..;)

OMG WOW! That was a such a great read, I was completely hard almost the whole time. This is actually one of my biggest fantasies and I would love to be him anytime! Thank you so such for an amazing fantasy story.

Wow wow. What a nice surprise for a massage. Jasmine your story’s are incredible. Thank you

lucky guy!

Very hot. Had me hard early on and made me cum twice! I need to get a massage, damn!!

That was the best massage I never had. I wonder who tips who and how much?

I want to be in the middle of a fuck sandwich now. Wow what a fantastic story. Thank you.

'Wildbill

Would love to find a massage parlor like this and receive the exact same massage!!!

Same time next week?!?? Where can I sign up?

very hot story, nicely done<3

I liked the story but precum which the author calls salty is always sweet!!!! Semen can be quite different in different individuals but in my moderate experience precum is always sweet and is also very slippery and produced by an entirely different gland than cum

The perfect massage story!!!

OMG so fucking sexy and a complete sissy fantasy - I came so hard into my crystal cum glass that I spilled over onto my stockings and panties but only lost a little before I drained every drop of that huge hot load, letting it drip slowly over my glossy wet pink lips and onto my lusting hot tongue and swirling it slowly around to taste all its slutty salty flavor and then slowly letting it slither down my moaning cumslut throat.

That sandwich scene was so hot omg

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A well written Sexcellent tale of Erotica!

11/10!!!!!