by bb1212
That would be my regular weekly place forever. I would t mind a job there. This is like my seventh reading over the years and it always pays off just as good as the first time. This should be a hall of fame story.
This was such a hot story. I could only imagine the feeling he had when he was in the middle of those two sexy gurls! I would love to find a massage venue like this one. Nicely written!
Wow! What a great story. I am so envious. I want a massage shop like this one. You write well and this story is very erotic. Yum!
A long time fantasy of mine, to be spit roasted by two incredibly sexy girls. I love coming back to this story year after year.
This story was amazing so hot. I knew jade was trans and was waiting for her to whip it out. God this would be amazing. I long to be with a sexy trans girl. Hopefully my experience will be half as good as this.
Wow what an awesome and totally sensual story. It’s been a fantasy of mine to be with two transgender women at the same time. I’ve only been lucky enough to be with one at a time. One year ago November (2021) I finally got with a gorgeous black transgendered woman who I met in 2017. We had never been together before that November night. Summer had wound up homeless again and she showed up at my apartment door that night in 2021. She was hungry so I fixed her something to eat. She ate that and was still hungry so I fixed her more. After she had her fill of food we were sitting on my couch talking like we had done many times before. She looked me in the eye and said “Do you want to touch it?” Of course I said yes. Summer undid the string holding up her sweatpants and pulled them down. I swear my jaw hit the floor. She was already hard and she was HUNG. 10 inches and as big around as my wrist. I leaned over and took her in my mouth and started sucking her. She was moaning and held my head as I went up and down on her. I could only get half of her in my mouth, but I was totally loving it. After about 15-20 minutes I ask her to fuck me. We tried and tried different positions, but she was just to big for me. So I had her sit back down and continued with giving her a blowjob. Almost an hour later I still hadn’t gotten her to cum and my jaw was hurting bad. Then I gave her the bed and I slept in my recliner. Next day I tried once again to get her off and it was the same results she couldn’t cum. That night I caught her smoking some Meth. For those who don’t know about Meth it makes a male hard but we just can’t cum. I had to tell her not to smoke in my apartment it could get me evicted. She did several other things over the next couple of days that could have caused me major problems including the third night after I fell asleep went out to wander the halls of the building NUDE wrapped only in a light summer blanket. I had to ask her to leave. We had a big fight and I haven’t seen or heard from her since.
Omg. Judging by how hard and wet my cock is, I’d give you 10 stars if I could. Great story. Well written. Of course, I’d so enjoy experiencing what David did. Very erotic.
OMG so fucking sexy and a complete sissy fantasy - I came so hard into my crystal cum glass that I spilled over onto my stockings and panties but only lost a little before I drained every drop of that huge hot load, letting it drip slowly over my glossy wet pink lips and onto my lusting hot tongue and swirling it slowly around to taste all its slutty salty flavor and then slowly letting it slither down my moaning cumslut throat.
I liked the story but precum which the author calls salty is always sweet!!!! Semen can be quite different in different individuals but in my moderate experience precum is always sweet and is also very slippery and produced by an entirely different gland than cum
Same time next week?!?? Where can I sign up?
very hot story, nicely done<3
Would love to find a massage parlor like this and receive the exact same massage!!!
I want to be in the middle of a fuck sandwich now. Wow what a fantastic story. Thank you.
'Wildbill
Very hot. Had me hard early on and made me cum twice! I need to get a massage, damn!!
Wow wow. What a nice surprise for a massage. Jasmine your story’s are incredible. Thank you
OMG WOW! That was a such a great read, I was completely hard almost the whole time. This is actually one of my biggest fantasies and I would love to be him anytime! Thank you so such for an amazing fantasy story.
OMG what a hot story. I think everyone would like to find this massage parlor. I know I would love to. Actually I would love to be one of the workers..;)
I read this story a while ago and it was hot then. Just Friday I went for a much needed massage and the woman could have been Julie although to my knowledge she wasn't equipped the same. But the experience brought up this story so I searched it out again. Still damned hot. Would love it if my new masseuse had a cock too. (She's an excellent masseuse regardless but it would be hot) Got me fantasizing about my next appointment.
This is definitely HOTTT!!! This PantieBoi barely made it halfway into this thread when Christine exploded into hur tight, lace thong...Mmmm!!! A fresh, dry string bikini panty got me to the end of Your erotic thread. A well written, nicely paced story. Thanks a bunch....... xoxoxo S.C.💃👠👙
Outstanding story, would have been nice to end with his answer about next week!! Other than that fantastic story. Now I have to keep looking for next week's adventure
This one is an incredible piece of writing . I would absolutely love to read about next week . I would also love to know where to find this place. Thanks for an excellent story , that I have read , at least a dozen times . This actually deserves a sixth star.
Wish I could have been there with you!
Bottoms up
spankmeagin
How beautifully sexy & sexually thrilling, I sure wish that I could've, should've & would've been there. (But for now just having these two ladies teasing my breasts as their teeth bite & tounges lick while they gently suck at my nipples with soft lips is all I ask for...
Happiest of endings indeed!! What a wonderfully well written and erotic story! I wouldn't mind that kind of experience myself! You have an absolutely amazing talent for story telling. Definitely adding you as a favorite author.
I have never been to a parlor before but if I were to go this would be the exact place I would go to. Great story
Maybe a sequel with his wife getting a massage to handle her stress? That would be perfect.
Fucking awesome. Stroking my cock with a prostate massager in me while reading the story. Barely made it to the end before ERUPTING with my orgasm. Thanks for the story
David got a FULL massage. How about round two, where Jade Cums down his throat to fill his tummy while Julie fills his ass,
This brought back happy memories of when I had 2 shemales, one in my ass and one in my mouth, I need to do that again real soon !!
Absolutely hot story, well written. 5*
As it appears him and his wife are swingers, how hot would have been to take them home for the next round??
Would have fave'd it if I was allowed as Anon.
JJ
Very hot story!!! I would love to experience sex with two she males .I often fantasize about being taken by two she males.I want to experience having one in my mouth and one in my ass at the same time.I want to feel them cum deep in my ass and fill my mouth with cum.
speaking of surprises, i found this story because it was noted as a favorite by another writer here. i see that it has been here for some time 4/07 and people have read it many times, probably more times than people have left comments. you should be very proud of this story the last comment in 2013, for a story to be read and commented on for 6 years is remarkable. it is sad that i was unable to find a continuation to this story. This story is well written, well executed, and to say the least very very hot. i have often fantasized about what is referred to as "Futanari" women, as in your story, i truly believe these are women that happen to have cocks. i do realize some of the movies that these women have made are fake, but my fantasy they are not and when they come in gallons, turns me on. it is now 2016 and your story still can turn on people, congratulations.
I love this story , and have re-read it , probably 20 times . I think this one should be continued .
I had a weekend in Japan just this and will never forget it because one of the ladies married a buddy of mine and lives next door,my wife and I love them both, she is a ladyboy too.
What a fun, sexy and erotic story! I didn't expect it to turn out the way it did but it was exciting to read and unfold the way it did. I would love to have been David and receive a massage like that...I love to be massaged and can only dream to be on the receiving end of a massage like that ;)
You don't want to hear this, I'm sure, but facts are not altered by irrational emotionally driven thought processes. I have no problem with any of the characters sexual preferences; indeed, I am bi myself, so it would be ridiculous to object to such a thing. What I have a problem with is you spitting on intersex individuals in the name of your own prejudice. What I mean is, unless you are born intersex, you have no right, or scientific justification, to claim to be a woman, or man, trapped in the opposite sex's body. None. You may be nutty as a pecan pie, but you aren't intersex. You are the sex your genetic code says you are. Saying otherwise is both nonsense, and an insult to actual people with intersex genetic characteristics. Whether that insult is common or not does not matter. Perpetuating it is wrong. My brother is intersex, with an extra x chromosome. He has suffered because of actual physical differences between him and "normal" (bullshit term) males. The "woman" in this story cannot say the same. His/her only justification for claiming to share my brothers pain is psychology. Meaning, he/she's not completely sane. To conflate her/his mental problems with my brother, and other people with intetsex characteristics, real, physically manifest causes for the suffering they endure is ignorant at best, and despicable at worst. Kindly cease this insulting pattern. Thank you. I anticipate your ignoring and deleting this comment. It will only cement in my mind the truth of your bigoted, self centered nature.
I regularly get a massage and more from a gay masseur, but to have a really feminine TS do the same has got to be a wonderful experience. Wish they were in Florida!
I Loved This Story; Well written and very erotic. I have been with a fair number of TS Ladies, and the majority of those exoeriences have been very good, a few were awesome, and a few were not so good. I find TS ladies very eritic, and had they had the support groups when I was young I may well have transitioned myself. My girlfriend/Mistress, loves to see me dressed in lingerie and pantyhose, simetimes we put make up on me sometimes not. We watch TS porn together and she encourages my femme side, saying I bet my little cum slut sissy bitch would love to have that nice juicy TS cock in her mouth right now, wouldn't you bitch. I say yes mistress and another in my boy puss in place of this vibrator too. That's my nasty little cum slut, you wanta cum for your Mistress, my nasty little sissy? Yes Misstress may I please cum for you. Well Okay, but you know the rules, you gotta eat it all up like the cum slut you are. Yes Mistress, may I have another taste of your sweet chocolate cum first My hot sexy Mistress. I thought you would never ask, here you go bitch lick my fingers clean, then cum for me and lick up every drop. YES Mistress my.pleasure.
was hoping that Allie would experience the same surprise and get really sexed and used by a transsexual......
Your combination of trannies and a massage scenario was over the top hot. Loved it. I was there with David the whole time.
Loved the story. Great stroking story and yes please keep on writing this story please
Nice to see two trannys working, and described so well that they both were a suprise.
...Keep me up at night. Would love to meet someone like David, very erotic and hot story that was well written and designed. Thanks for sharing David, Jade, and Julie with us, and please keep writing, you're very good!
It's kind of like when you go to the store for an item and come back with something completely different. David went in for tuna and decided to try the sausage instead. Good Story.
You have found another Band (Yes) to add to the Animiacs version of Who's on First:
Slappy Squirrel: ["The Who" is playing on Stage] Skippy, what's the name of the Band, playing on Stage?
Skippy Squirrel: Who.
Slappy Squirrel: The name of the Band.
Skippy Squirrel: Who.
Slappy Squirrel: The Band, playing on Stage.
Skippy Squirrel: WHO!
Slappy Squirrel: THE BAND!
Skippy Squirrel: No Aunt Slappy, "The Band" performs later, "WHO" is on Stage!
Slappy Squirrel: You tell me.
Skippy Squirrel: Who.
Slappy Squirrel: The name of the Band.
Skippy Squirrel: Who.
Slappy Squirrel: The Band playing on Stage.
Skippy Squirrel: Who.
Slappy Squirrel: THAT's WHAT I WANNA KNOW!
I would love to see a sequel involving the wife...maybe a few. If he is going to get "massaged" regularly, Allie might follow him and catch him in the act; or investigate on her own and get her own "massage"...leading to them running into each other...
I love the way you write.
I read this one before and lost track of the link. The second time I found it, I loved the delivery !!!! even more and forwarded it to a friend. Third times the charm. I can't get enough of your writing ... And the theme.
very very erotic ! I can easily imagine being Julie as I know a gurl just like her.
More please !!
Next time david should slide some thigh high sheer nylons on his legs so he can feel the girl nylons slip up and down his legs and get the whole sensation
by the WHO, or YES. one could type WHO OR YES or a new Abbot.Cosello monologue, and the answer us YES WHO or WHO is YES, is yes more than WHO or WHO is YES. I am still drunk from the Preakness, TK U MLJ LV NV
This is my previous comment trying to explain.
You are right
The CSI theme song was definitely by "The Who", not "Yes"
She asked "Who did the theme?"
He answered "Yes" - as in "yes they did" not as in the band called "Yes"
Thanks to everyone who has read, commented and/or voted on this story.
I am humbled by the incredible respose.
BB1212
The story was great - always enjoy a VG tranny story! Just a little correction - the theme songs for all the CSI shows were done by the WHO.
Duke
You have reason to be proud. So many quality followers of your erotic mind, and the fingers that translate into stimulating words for others to enjoy ... and stroke and Stroke too. Then there's "ruwild" who seeks works like this. For those who haven't found his works, I personally place ruwild on a similar plain with "bb1212". Oh so many quality authors, so many hot, good intentioned stories to keep the juices flowing. I love it here on LitErotica. I'm "with you" VWC10.
Very erotic story. Agree with another poster, get David's wife involved.
Story had me hard from the beginning. Wish I could find a place like that! Bet it would feel great taking two cocks at once.
I loved this story! It's the kind that really gets me going! I hope that you will write more T-Girl stories! This is the type of story I used to search for, but could never find. Thank you for sharing it with us.
THAT was one of the hottest stories I've read in a while. Well done.
i loved your story, i hope you will write more about them.
i hope you will make jade more dominant, she sounds amazing even if its just a story :)
This story seems like a dream!Thank you and I hope you will write more like it! perhaps a continuation would be fun, especially with the same characters!
This story was really a turn on for me. The idea behind the story is on my bucket list. My wife has fucked me with a dildo and fisted me. I would love to feel a hard cock cum in my ass while either sucking a cock or eating a hot wet pussy.
Great stoy, and unlike the other comment, I did get the 'Who'/'Yes' joke...
only thing wrong, The Who do the theme for CSI, not YES =) great story.
Great story. Would love to get taken like that.Have always wanted to find a women to fuck me in my ass. Living in a small town makes some of the great experiences with different sex experiences impossible to find.
I really laughed at "Hot wax for the shelf from the candle, Hot cum for me from Jade, he thought, that's almost poetic."