by James_Black001
Good story but you could use some english lessons and a good proof reader.
I enjoyed reading this very much and I do hope you intend to make this an on-going series. The possibilities are endless.......................................
decent story. question tho, how'd the main character start out with the name James, then become Jack?
You have a great start going. I do agree some prof reading could be used, but the concept is a very good one to go with. Plus you can go so many directions with it. I hope to see the next one soon