All Comments on 'The Last of the White Tigers'

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KamattlockKamattlockalmost 13 years ago
Interesting

An interesting story concept you could use an editor and the section where she is having a dream with her soul mate is a bit confusing but not to bad at least it was explained pretty well.

foxy_lady76foxy_lady76almost 13 years ago

nice beginning ... do continue writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Liked it alot

Please continue with this

Sonic_the_foxSonic_the_foxalmost 13 years ago

I quite like this story, it has promise. I agree with the comment about the editor, you could do with tidying up the tense a little bit but even with the few wee mistakes it's still quite enjoyable.

I hope you continue this!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Loved it

Cant wait to read more!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
GODDAMNIT

fucking cliffhangers :( . Please continue this soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Awesome

At least we like suspension :p Write on!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
bearmad1963 A White Tiger and The Wolf

almost everything is the same even the main character.

i really hate Plagiarism, cause thats what this story is like

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