All Comments on 'The New Dom'

please post soon.

not really sure what to make of this story, but i will say, i want to know more about the new dom and even more about Jessica.

You have an excellent beginning here. Will there be more? I want to know what happened for these people to be in this predicament and what happens to them.

I do hope you return to this story. You have a real talent.

I hope you will write more...right?

most excellent! The big 5 for this one. This could've developed into an interesting multi-chapter series. We can only wish...(PS: Couldn't login due to connection issues but I'm eWoman.)

this was a great start to a story but so many questions. why is the new dom disatisfied. is he undercover, is he like a legacy memmber who he just despises being that brutal? will alex and jessica find love and be able to escape the horrors of that club? yes, this story definatly needs more chapters.