All Comments on 'The Nutty Chocolatier'

This had everything! Humor, Love,Friendship,Being Sneaky,and Erotic!

I really enjoyed this, anb would love to see where the next chapter might lead.

Loved the story, very creative!! I would recommend you find a good editor to help you polish up your story before submitting it. Having someone help you to fix the grammatical and technical errors would take your story to much greater heights. There are skipped or repeated words and some other errors that detract from the greatness. Keep it up!!

This was a super sweet story, I love chocolates!!

I only can wish of a chocolate that can do that ! After reading this makes me want to go attack my boyfriend! Great job!

Couldn't bear to read what promised to be a good story... so many grammatical errors in the first 3 sentences that I skipped to the end. With an editor, you'd have kept my attention. I love Roald Dahl too, and anticipated liking your writing especially as a tribute to him. Too bad.

I agree some of the phrases and grammatical errors left me scratching my head. Otherwise I enjoyed the story.