Twenty minutes later Katie lied in that small twin bed ????? Where did lied come from?? It is LAY or in the instance, Katie lay in that small twin bed.
I have had many comments over the years about how my characters or story endings are flawed, but that's on purpose. After twenty years with a large police department, I've learned that people are flawed and are constantly acting in ways that defy logic. It is that illogical me...