All Comments on 'The Party'

Shakespear your not even a fractional amount close, so stop trying to write like you are. Setting a story in modern times and spelling words in 400+ year old fashion is pure stupid and confusing. Either use modern tense/spelling or don't waste reader's time.

Strong comment from someone that doesn't know his "you'res" from his "yours."

Oh well, can't please all the people all the time!