The Peanut Butter Girl

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With that she closed her eyes, and Peter left the cabin, shoes and socks in hand.

When he got outside, Cheryl was sitting on the steps, holding her forehead.

"Are you OK?" Peter asked, sitting down beside her so he put on his socks and shoes.

"Next time, I'm not having any of Janet's punch," she replied ruefully, "have I got a hangover!"

"How was the strip poker ... did you play?"

"Oh yeah ... we played; six of us ... all the way!"

"Wow ... how did the other kids handle it ... were they embarrassed?"

"Oh the stripping was nothing compared to the dares ... that Janet, she certainly likes to perform for an audience ... the wilder, the better. And, of course, anything she can do ... stupid Cheryl can do better ... if my mother had seen her precious little daughter, she would have fainted!"

"I'm blaming it entirely on the alcohol," Cheryl said with a little grimace, "no more drinking for me!"

Ten she added with a knowing smile, "But anyway, it looks like you and the 'peanut butter girl' made some fun of your own."

"Don't call her a 'peanut butter girl'," Peter protested.

"Sorry, I was just teasing you," Cheryl said, "... God have I got a headache!"

"Maybe you should go inside and get some sleep," Peter suggested, "the buses don't leave until 11."

"Good idea, because if I run into any of the poker gang; I might just possibly blush myself to death. Not that they weren't willing participants!"

With that Cheryl got up and went into the cabin.

"I wonder what did go on at Janet's last night?" Peter mused to himself, as he walked back to his cabin.

* * *

Peter stood beside his bus, waiting for Susan. When he saw her coming, he rushed over to her to help carry things.

"Are you OK," he said shyly, lowering his voice so no one else could hear him.

"Well my pussy is a little sore ... small wonder," she said with a giggle, taking his arm, "but I guess that's one of the hazards of being a 'peanut butter girl'!"

"Don't say that! Cheryl was teasing me about it this morning before you were up."

"Relax," Susan said smiling, "it's just a bit of an 'inside joke' now; between the three of us."

"Besides," Susan continued, "based on the little bit she told me about what happened at the end of the strip poker game, people could be calling her things a lot worse than that!"

"What things?"

"I promised not to say ... but just wait ... she never could keep a secret ... we'll get the whole story out of her soon!" Susan said with a laugh, "We'll invite her over to my place, and give her a few drinks ... and then she'll spill the beans!"

"She told me this morning she's sworn off drinking."

"Right; and when I got her up, she told me that she's sworn off sex too ... fat chance either one of those is happening!"

The two of them laughed conspiratorially as they neared the bus and prepared to board the students.

As the bus left the parking lot, and headed down the side road to the highway, Peter and Susan sat on the front bench seat, holding hands, discussing school and making plans for their date. Peter had never felt so wonderful, or so elated; for the first time in his life he had a girlfriend!

By 11, his stomach was reminding him that he had missed breakfast.

"Do you have anything to eat?" he asked Susan, "I didn't get up in time this morning."

"Neither did I," Susan answered with a smile, "you know ... late night and all!"

"Lucky for you," she added, "I went over to the kitchen before we left, and made up something quick for us ... pass me my knapsack."

Peter retrieved it from the overhead rack, and Susan took it and placed in on her lap. Unzipping it she pulled a brown paper bag from within it.

"What have you got?" he asked her.

"Just a couple of sandwiches."

"Oh, good ... what kind?"

"See for yourself!" Susan said with a twinkle in her eye.

Peter unwrapped his sandwich and looked at the filling ... it was peanut butter!!!

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oljeriniowaoljeriniowaover 10 years ago
Great Read

This was a well thought out story, all of it believable. The situations were realistic and I know of people who could have fulfilled the roles of Cheryl and Stephan, Susan and Peter very easily. Their characters seemed very real and I really liked the story. I think you are on the right track. Keep up the great work.

quandomquandomover 11 years ago
Simply - well done

Apart from being so very erotic - an engaging piece of writing which built and built.

You're a natural story teller. Sympathetic characters too.

I'll go and read more of your pieces.

Mostera1Mostera1over 12 years ago
Very well written

A nice story of young love. Sad that Susan was raped, and her reputation sullied, but this was an enjoyable read. You did a superb job with the erotica.

The explorations, the poker, the punch, was very well described.

This is by far one of your very best!

Thank you!

M1

TjSaxby52TjSaxby52over 12 years ago
Another Classic!

Once again, well done, seems that no matter what the story is or how drawn out it is or isn't you are capable of captivating the reader in a wonderfully entrancing way, thanks again for your talented work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Great read, keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Good-ish, but not as romantic or as interesting as The Yellow Sundress. That and Red Polka Dots are some of the best stories i've read on literotica! keep up the good work and ignore any perverted, sex-maniac's comments.

mtoldman33mtoldman33about 13 years ago
I Love Peanut Butter

Excellent story. Very enjoyable

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
THE AUDIENCE

Your audience is much determined by genera and style.

Your Proper Rules for Strip Poker is one of the higher rated group of stories in Literotica. (Very many of the highest rated stories are slow buildup with a bit of tenderness and sensitivity built in.)

With a changed style you will lose some old readers and gain some new ones.

The reason why I frequently check for new stories (from you) is because I consider the Strip Poker series exceptional.

I hope you write many stories in that style (which I will read). Anal and Gay stories will appeal to many, but not me.

I strongly suggest that you write the type stories that are natural for you and that you enjoy writing. Almost all authors are at their best when they follow that approach.

Personally, I listen to others because I often learn something I didn't know. But I choose my own path and follow my own heart.

Good Luck.

Please note: This would have been a private comment with return address IF you had allowed it. However, I never sign public comments.

BigJohn601BigJohn601over 13 years ago
You obviously have significant literary skills............

However, you must recognize that the audience you have selected is quite jaded. What you may consider as "dirty" doesn't rise to the expectations of most perverts. But it is close and I will be following the story looking for your best efforts. Great start!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
best story i have read....loved the slow buildup...

A very accomplished writer.... The interactions between the characters along with their development in their perspective roles makes this a wonderful story.... Along with that the blossoming love and the thrills of sexual discovery make this a must read.... If you have any writers that rail against your talent it is because they are absolute buffoons.... Some of the fines erotica I have ever had the pleasure of reading

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