by koala011860091
Very good - lovely slow build up. I am glad that you have not given up on the story. You are keeping a degree of believability in the action as well which is rare in stories on Literotica.
the slow build up is terrific. I know it requires a lot of patience. Well written.
Very great slow buildup without loosing my interest. With Heather so aroused, I would liked to see her allowed to bring herself off, maybe with the dildo. Looking forward to the next chapter.
this is one of the best stories i have read
cant wait to read part 5 to see how far rod & the room mates take her
PRAECEPTOR CXXXV
This story was worth the wait! This is one of the best I've read here.
Slowly working her roommates into the plot is really good. One seeming interested in participating and one goody two shoes to put her on edge anticipating being revealed as an exhibitionist slut and possibly more is brilliant.
This is one of the best stories I have read on this site. Koala has done a masterful job of creating a believable blackmail story, and all the subsequent shenanigans. Wonderful work