All Comments on 'The Present'

I loved it... I loved it...

You have to promise us to write several more chapters on this story.

I just love a straight conservative executive woman gradually awakening to her inner bad side, to become a full open slut and be proud of it.

This is so exciting... Please, keep on writing this story, you're so good at it.

I bet you're a woman, aren't you?... Even if you're not, your mind is. And a feminine mind can write very good erotic story.

A bit long to get to the point, maybe... but very good, nevertheless.

Thank you so much for writing this story.

Brilliant, best I've read in this genre for ages. Hope there's more.....

So the store has drugs pumped into the air system, so what? Most women dress to impress, but most dont know how. This one is finding out quickly, so what?