All Comments on 'The Taking of Nathalia'

This story is okay.

Great fucking story, a bit mushy with good sex scenes

A bit slow to start but the bondage was great. I loved the description of him sticking his fingers in around the dildo, and when he fucks her when she has the butt plug insider her.

The sex and the BDSM was good, you really gotinto those characters heads.

I like the way they felt it was kismet when they first met. That immediate chemistry really made the submission work for me as a reader. I really liked the tone and language changed between the two scenes based on the type of sex from pussy to fuckhole. Nice touch. Your characters have a unique voice. You really get in their heads. I wanted to hear more.

I have recently meet 3 ladies that make me feel this way