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Cheers and Tears,
~Talyis
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 8 years agoReally good, but I felt like the ending didn't do it justice.
magevalmost 10 years agoThis is the first story on this site that has made me cry from the very first chapter to the last. Heart-wrenching...
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoI really loved the way this story was written and it was amazing how they found love but I fell that her dieing is like a punch to the gut for everyone. It feels so sad knowing that even though he has moved on and has his daughter, he will never hold her again. I like this story and I feel that in my heart she didn't die in the story but lives with him as queen.
Anonymousover 11 years agoI personally didn't like the ending, because after she went through traumatic events, depression, and emotional scaring she dies!! I knew she was going to die when she continually got sick. I love all the other stories but I wish she didn't have to die! I think it would've been more dramatic if umma died and then the two love birds could live happily together. Other than the predictable ending I enjoyed this story.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoThe whole series was sad as a whole, especially in Talyis's point of view. Imagine being so emotionally scarred as to be terrified of loving ones soulmate because you literally CAN'T be hurt anymore or else you would die merely of losing the will to live. Anyway, please make a sequel if you can, preferably in a happier setting.
