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by bigcarl796

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tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
A VISITOR INDICATES A ONE TIME CUMMING

this has the earmarks of a term-family affair. TK U MLJ LV NV

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
A good start

Is his buddy going to get to fuck his mom too, while he is fucking his buddies wife?

chytownchytownover 12 years ago
WOW!!!!!

I do not know what the hell this is about but it is HOT!!!!!!!.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 11 years ago
Hope this is a phone call!

So, our Hero is informing Bosom Buddy that he is boffing BB's Sweet Old Mom. And doing a very good job at it, confirmed by Mom at orgasm! Also, that Mom accuses Hero of poking BB's Sweetie, as well! Plus, Hero is NOT denying Mom's claim! On the contrary, BB is told that Mom gave Our Hero an inadvertent compliment by admitting that Sweetie was acting Very Well Fucked, a compliment which made Our Hero proud! Finally, that Mom found laughable the possibility that Her Son, BB, was the one making Sweetie grin like a Cheshire Cat.

Tough-love reality-adjustment disclosure for BB! Cold turkey time! A bit stretched-out in several places, but this is probably one side of a phone conversation, and so the choppy one- or two-sentence descriptions of a single aspect at a time seems reasonable!

4*

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 11 years ago
Oops

Quick corrections...Mom was disgusted at Our Hero laughing, but did agree Her Son was a sexual DUD! (NOT a 'dude' , BigCarl).

Nice story! Really enjoyed it once I figured out the format and the relationship among the players!

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
Big Carl

Honestly, that was a pretty messed up story. Never got into it at all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Are you twelve?

One of worst examples of story telling I've ever encountered.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
PLEASE!

“Twelve” is giving him too much credit.

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