All Comments on 'The Web Ch. 04'

Love the series to date! Very original and well written. Next chapter please.

I just love the way your story is developing.

One minor lapse that annoys.....' lied' is the past tense of lie...to tell a non truth.

You should be using 'lay' or 'laid'

Still enjoying myself.

Loving the chemistry between them.

Josie

Chapter 4 of this heart-warming story may be too short, but it has wonderful characters and excellent characters. The plot is marvelous and the love scene is icing on the cake. Five stars.