All Comments on 'Those Days of...Ch. 16-20'

by TonyDowse

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bornagainbornagainover 17 years ago
High Marks to you

I give you a High score on that the scene with Helen and Barbera was to short i wish you had it a little longer and less going back to there stories and lengthen the scenes longer.

Pat

Atlanta,Ga

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
What of Julia?

You go deep into the thoughts and emotions of Helen, Barbara, and Roger yet aside from rare mentions about her mainly in relation to Barbara living with her, she is not a charactor in the story. If memory serves Roger has not even spoken to her since he walked out after catching her with Barbara. No talk of divorce, no lunch meetings to talk things over. Will she become part of the story later on? After several years of marriage with Roger and a several month affair with Barbara someone must have some feelings about her.

Thank you for sharing

Jimguy

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