All Comments on 'Twelve Gates Ch. 08'

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eaglejet1eaglejet1about 10 years ago

This just keeps getting better, I have to wonder how this story will end. But I don't want it to end, well not just yet.

Thank you so much, I love these two characters!!!

5 more stars from me!

mel_pomenemel_pomeneabout 10 years ago
Excellent!

Just as good as when it first began - a marvellous story. Thank you for sharing it with us. Another five stars!

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimabout 10 years ago
Me too

Loving this romantic BDSM

5 stars from me as well

elisebeeelisebeeabout 10 years ago
Nervous

That's what the first few chapters made me. I kept waiting for the shoe to drop. Now I totally trust the adventure they are on and start each chapter with anticipation and finish with pleasure. Well done!

MiramiraMiramiraabout 10 years ago
Awesome

This is getting better with each new chapter

Shysub412Shysub412about 10 years ago
Beautiful chapter

Loving this story more and more with each instalment

Yet again 5 stars from me!

jhollanderjhollanderabout 10 years ago

With each gate he draws her more into his world and his control, just as you're drawing us readers in. This amazing story continues inspire me!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wonderful!

Good good good! Keep going!

domlooking4subdomlooking4subabout 10 years ago
Love it

This is by far on of the best series going. Keep it up (Pun intended)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
OMG i wish there were 60 gates

loving this series

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
too far

asking her to quit her job creeps me out and not having a real conversation about it was even worse. I know this is just a story but as a woman in the lifestyle who has seen so many struggle to get out of abusive, too controlling relationships I can't overlook something like that even in fiction.

Wonderful writing though.

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