All Comments on 'Two Girls & The Photographer'

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Billydee2Billydee2over 16 years ago
Nice So Far

Let's see more

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

Three mistakes in the first three sentences.

Back to the drawing board.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

there are grammatical errors but it's good and very hot. Would you like me to correct the grammar for you?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
How a detail spoiled it for me

I want to offer constructive critiscism: please avoid exagerated sizes 38DDD. I hate to see your efforts go to waste.

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